Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from Margaret Snowdon
apart from anyway should be two words,
when using it as thus:
Is there any way to stop her
your presentation is perfect, and the whole
chapter flew so naturally.
Most enjoyable Barbara.
Margaret
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2011
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apart from anyway should be two words,
when using it as thus:
Is there any way to stop her
your presentation is perfect, and the whole
chapter flew so naturally.
Most enjoyable Barbara.
Margaret
Comment Written 15-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from JW
This chapter makes another excellent addition to your story. It definitely holds the readers interest all the way to the end and makes them wonder what additional trouble Mrs.. Rogers is going to cause.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your new school year. JW
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This chapter makes another excellent addition to your story. It definitely holds the readers interest all the way to the end and makes them wonder what additional trouble Mrs.. Rogers is going to cause.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your new school year. JW
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from peggles
That Mrs... Rodgers is the original mother-in-law from hell she is a nasty piece of work
fancy having to put up with her
This is cleverly written and well thought out
Your end notes are most informative
I enjoyed reading this chapter and look forward to the next one
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That Mrs... Rodgers is the original mother-in-law from hell she is a nasty piece of work
fancy having to put up with her
This is cleverly written and well thought out
Your end notes are most informative
I enjoyed reading this chapter and look forward to the next one
Comment Written 15-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from DebbieLass
This is my first time to read one of your chapters. Interesting story. I also found your author notes to be very helpful for those who might need them. You write well. I hope to read more as time goes by.
Debbie
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This is my first time to read one of your chapters. Interesting story. I also found your author notes to be very helpful for those who might need them. You write well. I hope to read more as time goes by.
Debbie
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Your welcome!
Comment from judiverse
I'm going with 6 stars, barbara. I've read previous chapters and the story is developing really well. I'm afraid Mrs.. Rodgers is stealing the show for me. She's a real piece of work, intent on causing trouble. Isn't it a wonder how those mothers always stick up for their no-good sons? This really captured my interest. Will be curious to see what other problems Anna encounters as she begins her new life. Good luck with the back-to-school routine.
judiverse
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I'm going with 6 stars, barbara. I've read previous chapters and the story is developing really well. I'm afraid Mrs.. Rodgers is stealing the show for me. She's a real piece of work, intent on causing trouble. Isn't it a wonder how those mothers always stick up for their no-good sons? This really captured my interest. Will be curious to see what other problems Anna encounters as she begins her new life. Good luck with the back-to-school routine.
judiverse
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Thank you for the kind review and your insight.
Comment from tango494
Excellent job on your latest chapter. I love the vivid detail you employed in the first paragraph of this chapter. Your dialogues are also excellent, well written and very believable. Another awesome job.
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Excellent job on your latest chapter. I love the vivid detail you employed in the first paragraph of this chapter. Your dialogues are also excellent, well written and very believable. Another awesome job.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Cynthia Tee
Another well written part of your book Barbara. I could almost hate people like Mrs. Rodgers! I have just seen something very interesting in your author notes viz. that women who actually stay are safer off than those who leave! It just shows that once you marry someone like Bobby you are in a lose/lose situation. That was one of the reasons I moved over a thousand kilometres away from my ex. Thank you for sharing another great write. Warm hugs, Cynthia xx
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Another well written part of your book Barbara. I could almost hate people like Mrs. Rodgers! I have just seen something very interesting in your author notes viz. that women who actually stay are safer off than those who leave! It just shows that once you marry someone like Bobby you are in a lose/lose situation. That was one of the reasons I moved over a thousand kilometres away from my ex. Thank you for sharing another great write. Warm hugs, Cynthia xx
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Thank you for the kind review and insight.
Comment from Piggies Grandma
This is cleverly written and well thought out Barbara. The mother-in-law is a real piece of work, imagine having to put up with her. I enjoyed reading this chapter and look forwards to the next one.
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This is cleverly written and well thought out Barbara. The mother-in-law is a real piece of work, imagine having to put up with her. I enjoyed reading this chapter and look forwards to the next one.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dmjones
I definitely see why Bobby is the way he is. This is a good chapter. Anna seems to be getting stronger mentally and she seems more determined. Keep writing this is a wonderful story.
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I definitely see why Bobby is the way he is. This is a good chapter. Anna seems to be getting stronger mentally and she seems more determined. Keep writing this is a wonderful story.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Oh, I do like Paul's sense of humor. Adding his fee would be justice. He can always donate it to charity if he chooses.
Getting a clean title to Anna's car is going to be a headache. That signature poses DMV problems. Of course, it's custody leverage, so it may be worth the bother.
How are they going to keep Anna safe after hearing that Bobby's threatened Anna's life re the car? We know what restraining orders are worth.
Well done, Barbara. :) Nancy
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Oh, I do like Paul's sense of humor. Adding his fee would be justice. He can always donate it to charity if he chooses.
Getting a clean title to Anna's car is going to be a headache. That signature poses DMV problems. Of course, it's custody leverage, so it may be worth the bother.
How are they going to keep Anna safe after hearing that Bobby's threatened Anna's life re the car? We know what restraining orders are worth.
Well done, Barbara. :) Nancy
Comment Written 15-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.