Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Part two, Chapter 10"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
What a jerk. I can't believe how some men still think women are their property. Well written chapter that really shows the reader what Bobby is like!!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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What a jerk. I can't believe how some men still think women are their property. Well written chapter that really shows the reader what Bobby is like!!!! Debbie
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mariea
Good morning Barbara. Another good fast moving chapter without any clutter. Characters and dialogue still consistent. Legal procedure well portrayed but still understandable. I look forward to the next chapter. No editing necessary that I could see.
Have a great day, hugs Mia
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Good morning Barbara. Another good fast moving chapter without any clutter. Characters and dialogue still consistent. Legal procedure well portrayed but still understandable. I look forward to the next chapter. No editing necessary that I could see.
Have a great day, hugs Mia
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from sunnilicious
The story sure picked up some speed. I like how you sprinkled in the mother yelling, kitty confession and babysitter story. Seemed like a real court case scenario unlike those tv judge shows. It's all good. Well written. Enjoyable read. Keep it up.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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The story sure picked up some speed. I like how you sprinkled in the mother yelling, kitty confession and babysitter story. Seemed like a real court case scenario unlike those tv judge shows. It's all good. Well written. Enjoyable read. Keep it up.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
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u're welcome
Comment from Writingfundimension
This is another fine chapter to your novel. You included enough legal detail to make it sound realistic, but not too much. Some interesting foreshadowing in the final encounter with the mother-in-law. Bev
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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This is another fine chapter to your novel. You included enough legal detail to make it sound realistic, but not too much. Some interesting foreshadowing in the final encounter with the mother-in-law. Bev
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Thanjk you for the kind review.
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'Welcome!
Comment from phattp
Great piece of writing. It seems like it may be written based on some personal experience, which, if so, I sympathise with completely. Very moving and well worded. I'm giving this one six stars.
There's one small typo, which I hope you don't mind me pointing out..
The quotation marks are missing after.... "Everything becomes final once the papers are final" <<.
Well done and have a great day :) P.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Great piece of writing. It seems like it may be written based on some personal experience, which, if so, I sympathise with completely. Very moving and well worded. I'm giving this one six stars.
There's one small typo, which I hope you don't mind me pointing out..
The quotation marks are missing after.... "Everything becomes final once the papers are final" <<.
Well done and have a great day :) P.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and I will take care of that.
Comment from Shela Francis
You're right it is long cause I hesitated to read it but I'm glad I did cause it's a lot of that going on men abusing their power to rule and be over the house hold, and I feel so sorry for her, and the child. I'm very heart broken they had to endure such abuse.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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You're right it is long cause I hesitated to read it but I'm glad I did cause it's a lot of that going on men abusing their power to rule and be over the house hold, and I feel so sorry for her, and the child. I'm very heart broken they had to endure such abuse.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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I usually don't post this long of posts, but I couldn't figure out where to break it, sorry. Thank you for the kind review.
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Oh' no need to be sorry I'm glad I took time out to read it the pleasure was all mine! And you're very welcome.
Comment from rchitwood
Very good and again you have written this well.I enjoyed reading it your story tells a truthful tale of abuse and I only wish it were longer.Your writing is very creative and has good dialogue and characters.Very believable emotions present here.I would recommend this to others.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Very good and again you have written this well.I enjoyed reading it your story tells a truthful tale of abuse and I only wish it were longer.Your writing is very creative and has good dialogue and characters.Very believable emotions present here.I would recommend this to others.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Thank your for the kind review.
Comment from MS Writer
Barbara I didn't find it long at all. It's so interesting and well written that it was easy to read. It's obvious that Bobby is not too bright. Nice pace and again incredible notes. Great read.
Michele
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Barbara I didn't find it long at all. It's so interesting and well written that it was easy to read. It's obvious that Bobby is not too bright. Nice pace and again incredible notes. Great read.
Michele
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Thank your for your kind review.
Comment from rheabug
This was a very well written chapter in your ongoing book. The trial scene was a good one showing Bobby for what he is to the judge. Mrs. Rodgers is a loony tune. Wishing all the best to you in your endeavors.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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This was a very well written chapter in your ongoing book. The trial scene was a good one showing Bobby for what he is to the judge. Mrs. Rodgers is a loony tune. Wishing all the best to you in your endeavors.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Thank your for your kind review.
Comment from Kaze
I just started reading this story, but the subject matter you are touching upon is very very important in my opinion. I personally have not been a subject of this sort of abuse, but I know many women who have, and it's really disgusting. I like the way you portray your characters--very real and believable.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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I just started reading this story, but the subject matter you are touching upon is very very important in my opinion. I personally have not been a subject of this sort of abuse, but I know many women who have, and it's really disgusting. I like the way you portray your characters--very real and believable.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2011
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Thank your for your kind review.