Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from judiverse
Really great, Barbara. The reader is looking forward to Peggy getting her due, and it seems that's about to happen. Anna's lucky to have such excellent defenders. I thought the chapter read smoothly without unneeded distractions, and the dialogue and actions were realistic. We see at the end that Anna is still worried about what mischief her ex-husband might be up to. judi
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Really great, Barbara. The reader is looking forward to Peggy getting her due, and it seems that's about to happen. Anna's lucky to have such excellent defenders. I thought the chapter read smoothly without unneeded distractions, and the dialogue and actions were realistic. We see at the end that Anna is still worried about what mischief her ex-husband might be up to. judi
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
WONDERFUL NEW CHAPTER! VERY WELL WRITTEN, AND WITH A VERY IMPORTANT MEDICAL INFORMATION. THIS CHAPTER BRINGS HOPE FOR ANNA, WHICH KEEPS UP THE INTEREST OF THE READERS.
BLESSING FOR YOU BARBARA!
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WONDERFUL NEW CHAPTER! VERY WELL WRITTEN, AND WITH A VERY IMPORTANT MEDICAL INFORMATION. THIS CHAPTER BRINGS HOPE FOR ANNA, WHICH KEEPS UP THE INTEREST OF THE READERS.
BLESSING FOR YOU BARBARA!
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from bookishfabler
sounds like a never ending saga. But well written and entertaining. I saw no nits tha tpopped out at me. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing. Hope you are feeling well.
hugs Heidi
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sounds like a never ending saga. But well written and entertaining. I saw no nits tha tpopped out at me. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing. Hope you are feeling well.
hugs Heidi
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
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you're welcome
Comment from Karen Payton Holt
The underhand things that Peggy Rodgers is guilty of are despicable. Using everything at her disposal to have Anna declared an unfit mother.
The thing about these situations is that even when the accusations are hollow, the strain of defending yourself against them can be the straw that breaks the back.
Pulls at the heart strings.
Great chapter..
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The underhand things that Peggy Rodgers is guilty of are despicable. Using everything at her disposal to have Anna declared an unfit mother.
The thing about these situations is that even when the accusations are hollow, the strain of defending yourself against them can be the straw that breaks the back.
Pulls at the heart strings.
Great chapter..
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Writeaway...
I have just finished reading up to this point on your book barbara, and it is very impressive what you have written. Beleivable and well developed characters and plot, I cannot suggest anything for improvment, an excellent job, keep writing!! :)
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I have just finished reading up to this point on your book barbara, and it is very impressive what you have written. Beleivable and well developed characters and plot, I cannot suggest anything for improvment, an excellent job, keep writing!! :)
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from MS Writer
Very dramatic turn of events. It sounds as if Anna feels that this is not the end. Well written and an interesting read.
just threaten to so Anna would appear as an unfit mother.
-Perhaps `just threaten so Anna...
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Very dramatic turn of events. It sounds as if Anna feels that this is not the end. Well written and an interesting read.
just threaten to so Anna would appear as an unfit mother.
-Perhaps `just threaten so Anna...
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Court-room cases are so distressing.
You carried this one off so well, Barbara.
Poor Anna is a bag of nerves, which is
understandable.
lose Michael.["] The
threat [is] this disease (is)to the
Attempted child abduction[,](;)
Margaret
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Court-room cases are so distressing.
You carried this one off so well, Barbara.
Poor Anna is a bag of nerves, which is
understandable.
lose Michael.["] The
threat [is] this disease (is)to the
Attempted child abduction[,](;)
Margaret
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and I will get on those corrections.
Comment from peggles
The courtroom dramas keeps going
you must taken a long time researching this
Its sounds so true to life
This is a very interesting chapter
I enjoyed the drama you portray
I was relieved when Anna won her case
I look forward to more of this
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The courtroom dramas keeps going
you must taken a long time researching this
Its sounds so true to life
This is a very interesting chapter
I enjoyed the drama you portray
I was relieved when Anna won her case
I look forward to more of this
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from robina1978
This is so good: the toddler has been vaccinated for hepatitis and this way Troy could in no way have been a threat to the kid. Then even better they prove that the mother staged the kidnap as we thought all along that she might be involved. So Anna is free and she goes to jail.
Anna does not feel safe and might never feel safe again I fear.
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This is so good: the toddler has been vaccinated for hepatitis and this way Troy could in no way have been a threat to the kid. Then even better they prove that the mother staged the kidnap as we thought all along that she might be involved. So Anna is free and she goes to jail.
Anna does not feel safe and might never feel safe again I fear.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
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very welcome- you are doing so well with this book. I love it as well as do most I see from your reviews. Ine
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Barbara, you've done a great job with this. Anna is right. When Bobby gets out of prison, her life is over. The laws don't protect you from those who don't care about obeying them. An excelent write. :) Nancy
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Barbara, you've done a great job with this. Anna is right. When Bobby gets out of prison, her life is over. The laws don't protect you from those who don't care about obeying them. An excelent write. :) Nancy
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Thank you for the kind review.