Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Part two Chapter 14"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from tango494
As with all your post, this one is very well written and your grammar and overall presentation are amazing. I love your narration and dialogue skills and have come to love reading and reviewing your work. Thanks for sharing.
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As with all your post, this one is very well written and your grammar and overall presentation are amazing. I love your narration and dialogue skills and have come to love reading and reviewing your work. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
Another great chapter,
Poor Anna, she just can't accept what a good mother she is. Her self-doubts are the usual result of an early marriage and an abusive husband. In addition she lacked the support of her own family. She has nothing to show her what is required of a good mother, although she should be getting the right Idea from Troy's mother and family.
This is an excellent example of the trials of keeping children Safe. No one can anticipate all accidents and unusual events, but Anna is learning.
Troy would have received a tetanus shot even if the dogs shots were up-to-date.
Now the owner of the loud mufflers needs to be found.
Love and Irish hugs,
Roger
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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Hi Barbara:)
Another great chapter,
Poor Anna, she just can't accept what a good mother she is. Her self-doubts are the usual result of an early marriage and an abusive husband. In addition she lacked the support of her own family. She has nothing to show her what is required of a good mother, although she should be getting the right Idea from Troy's mother and family.
This is an excellent example of the trials of keeping children Safe. No one can anticipate all accidents and unusual events, but Anna is learning.
Troy would have received a tetanus shot even if the dogs shots were up-to-date.
Now the owner of the loud mufflers needs to be found.
Love and Irish hugs,
Roger
Comment Written 19-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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Thank you, I have considered that he would need a tetnus shot unless his is up to date. I have that written in the next post.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Barbara, your post is flawlessly written. I've had bones in each of my feet broken by a hundred-pound German Shepherd. Stuff happens. Well done. Merry Christmas. :) Nancy
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Barbara, your post is flawlessly written. I've had bones in each of my feet broken by a hundred-pound German Shepherd. Stuff happens. Well done. Merry Christmas. :) Nancy
Comment Written 19-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words
Comment from robina1978
What a scare and dogs tend to go for biscuits , especially when kids are holding them. They seem to sense that they are easy targets. Good in a way that Troy got the bite- but what a big one. It would have been a disaster if it had bitten the toddler. Anna gets scared straight away that she will be blamed again. What a sad life still. Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year as well. Did not know you had two big dogs. We just have a small one now as we are getting older.
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What a scare and dogs tend to go for biscuits , especially when kids are holding them. They seem to sense that they are easy targets. Good in a way that Troy got the bite- but what a big one. It would have been a disaster if it had bitten the toddler. Anna gets scared straight away that she will be blamed again. What a sad life still. Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year as well. Did not know you had two big dogs. We just have a small one now as we are getting older.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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I bhave written a few poems, not very good poems, but poems about my dogs. Thank you for the kind review.
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Surely you can do good poems, why not? Someforms are easy to do.
Comment from The Stranger
well now we have to see if Troy has contracted Rabies! exceellent story as ever, nice to hear somebody refer to Anna as a good mom too!
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well now we have to see if Troy has contracted Rabies! exceellent story as ever, nice to hear somebody refer to Anna as a good mom too!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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Hadn't thought of giving Troy rabies, interesting thought. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Chris Tee
This is an absolutely marvelous chapter we have here Barbara old sport.
Well done indeed with this splendid work here and seasonal greetings to you as well.
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This is an absolutely marvelous chapter we have here Barbara old sport.
Well done indeed with this splendid work here and seasonal greetings to you as well.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Readywriter52
The dog bite has really shaken Anna. She feels like a failure as a mother. I'm worried that Bobby's mother will hear about the incident and use it to try to get Michael from his mother. The boy should have retained better control of the dog. This incident could lead to serious consequences for both Anna and the boy.
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The dog bite has really shaken Anna. She feels like a failure as a mother. I'm worried that Bobby's mother will hear about the incident and use it to try to get Michael from his mother. The boy should have retained better control of the dog. This incident could lead to serious consequences for both Anna and the boy.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2011
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Very true. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
Every time I read a chapter in your book I do it with a bit of fear for Anna and Michael now I wonder who is the driver of that loud car? Poor Anna, she is sure she is Good chapter and excellent writing....blessings, chey.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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Hi Barbara,
Every time I read a chapter in your book I do it with a bit of fear for Anna and Michael now I wonder who is the driver of that loud car? Poor Anna, she is sure she is Good chapter and excellent writing....blessings, chey.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Paradox Tremors
Wow, thank-God Michael was okay. I'm sorry Troy got bit but better him than the child--that's just my view and all. Well written my friend and very realistically done.
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Wow, thank-God Michael was okay. I'm sorry Troy got bit but better him than the child--that's just my view and all. Well written my friend and very realistically done.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from alexisleech
The main point that comes across, from my point of view, is the guilt and fear Anna feels at the thought that actions, however much out of her control, could possibly mean that she could lose her child. I'm sure that this is just another example of how an abused wife must feel. Well done for bringing it to the fore!
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The main point that comes across, from my point of view, is the guilt and fear Anna feels at the thought that actions, however much out of her control, could possibly mean that she could lose her child. I'm sure that this is just another example of how an abused wife must feel. Well done for bringing it to the fore!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2011
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Yes it is. Thank you for the kind review.