Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "part one, Chapter 16"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from keimosobie
I think it's great that you are committed to helping people in abusive situations. This sounds like something you have been through. Hard to believe some people have nothing better to do then to go around hurting people.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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I think it's great that you are committed to helping people in abusive situations. This sounds like something you have been through. Hard to believe some people have nothing better to do then to go around hurting people.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Barb Great Chapter.
You warned me there was going to be drama in Anna's life
Your right -- it looks like there is a bit of tricky schemes.
that someone is setting up.
It doesna't look good to me.
Gert
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Hi Barb Great Chapter.
You warned me there was going to be drama in Anna's life
Your right -- it looks like there is a bit of tricky schemes.
that someone is setting up.
It doesna't look good to me.
Gert
Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from stanzasandstuff
oooh this is so familiar! Do all these male bullies read the same book? Always beware of people who start their sentences with 'you...' is my belief. Extremely well written. I am really enjoying reading this book of yours. Well penned and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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oooh this is so familiar! Do all these male bullies read the same book? Always beware of people who start their sentences with 'you...' is my belief. Extremely well written. I am really enjoying reading this book of yours. Well penned and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from alexisleech
A very clever hook at the end of this chapter, which makes the reader want to turn the page as soon as possible. I know Anna is getting stronger by the minute, but I get the impression that it would only take the slightest thing to tip her over the edge again. Alexis x
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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A very clever hook at the end of this chapter, which makes the reader want to turn the page as soon as possible. I know Anna is getting stronger by the minute, but I get the impression that it would only take the slightest thing to tip her over the edge again. Alexis x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from bhogg
Barbara - you do know how to build tension, but to leave us, your poor readers hanging. Now, that's just cruel. Another great post to your wonderful story. Warm regards, Bill
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Barbara - you do know how to build tension, but to leave us, your poor readers hanging. Now, that's just cruel. Another great post to your wonderful story. Warm regards, Bill
Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rightforyou
Barbra
It seems like Anna is in the same predicament, her ex is still acting like the fool he is, stalking and threatening her. I can't wait until she takes a baseball bat and swings at his head. Great suspense. Story well written. I will be sure to follow the next few chapters....Great story Ron
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Barbra
It seems like Anna is in the same predicament, her ex is still acting like the fool he is, stalking and threatening her. I can't wait until she takes a baseball bat and swings at his head. Great suspense. Story well written. I will be sure to follow the next few chapters....Great story Ron
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mumsyone
Hi, Barbara. Another good chapter. I'm glad Anna was smart enough to stay inside the locked car.
She turned toward the man,(no comma) sitting by the door and grinned.
Ginger told me they sold (sell) the best sandwiches and salads."
I volunteered(,) and I don't regret it.
"I'll see you tonight(,) after your meeting.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
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Hi, Barbara. Another good chapter. I'm glad Anna was smart enough to stay inside the locked car.
She turned toward the man,(no comma) sitting by the door and grinned.
Ginger told me they sold (sell) the best sandwiches and salads."
I volunteered(,) and I don't regret it.
"I'll see you tonight(,) after your meeting.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from AprilShower
These people never stop. I wonder what they are up to now. Why would they steel Troy's medical records. It looks like whoever did that will end up in prison,too. The chapter held my attention all the way through. Hopefully she will be safe in the car.
April
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These people never stop. I wonder what they are up to now. Why would they steel Troy's medical records. It looks like whoever did that will end up in prison,too. The chapter held my attention all the way through. Hopefully she will be safe in the car.
April
Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Barbara, This is a good story. Your dialog reads well and it is clearly a conversation between man and a woman. I'm just learning how to do that male conversation thing and it's hard...lol...so I am impressed when I see it done as well as you have done so. Great write. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
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Hi Barbara, This is a good story. Your dialog reads well and it is clearly a conversation between man and a woman. I'm just learning how to do that male conversation thing and it's hard...lol...so I am impressed when I see it done as well as you have done so. Great write. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from pickthorn
I missed the last few chapters but it seems like Anna is in the same predicament she was in when I last read this story a month or so ago. Her ex is still stalking and threatening her. Great suspense. Story well written. I will be sure to follow this drama until conclusion.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
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I missed the last few chapters but it seems like Anna is in the same predicament she was in when I last read this story a month or so ago. Her ex is still stalking and threatening her. Great suspense. Story well written. I will be sure to follow this drama until conclusion.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.