The Animal Doctor
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Comment from marijmd
Wait he named his own daughter Margaret! Warning Bells on that one! It is sad that after adult Margaret brook his heart once - she is not happy to see him content.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Wait he named his own daughter Margaret! Warning Bells on that one! It is sad that after adult Margaret brook his heart once - she is not happy to see him content.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Ah ha, caught you. Smile.. You missed a couple of chapters. Actually, I'm letting the reader decide, but Nathan's mother's middle name is Margaret and that's how he got away with it. But thank you so much for reading this chapter.
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
I am happy to see the return of Nathan, Grace and Baby Margaret. ( I still don't understand how he could name the baby Margaret, but he did) It may seem, life as usual, but when Margaret shows up, one has to wonder just how long peace will reign? I enjoyed this chapter, as usual.
:-) Carolyn
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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I am happy to see the return of Nathan, Grace and Baby Margaret. ( I still don't understand how he could name the baby Margaret, but he did) It may seem, life as usual, but when Margaret shows up, one has to wonder just how long peace will reign? I enjoyed this chapter, as usual.
:-) Carolyn
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Thank you, Carolyn I'm glad you hung in there while I was taking a well deserved break from my story. I'm glad you enjoy my characters. I promise to keep them interesting.
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You always do, :-)
Comment from padumachitta
Hello. Another good chapter. I like the description throughout the piece....Joseph clothing, bacon and eggs, coffee bubbling...I can see and hear things, to feel the scenery around the characters.
This makes the whole much more real.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Hello. Another good chapter. I like the description throughout the piece....Joseph clothing, bacon and eggs, coffee bubbling...I can see and hear things, to feel the scenery around the characters.
This makes the whole much more real.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much for reading and noticing what I worked so hard to do and that is to get my readers to see what's in my mind.
Comment from Titanx9
The scheming Margaret is up to no good and will try, I'm sure, to hone in on Grace's territory. I hope Grace has a trick or two up her sleeves. I'm loving the easy relationship she and Nathan has. Great job!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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The scheming Margaret is up to no good and will try, I'm sure, to hone in on Grace's territory. I hope Grace has a trick or two up her sleeves. I'm loving the easy relationship she and Nathan has. Great job!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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thank you so much for reading. I'm not sure what Margaret will do. I'm still working on it. smile.
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I know how that is, my friend. I'm in having that same dilemma right now with my story. Good luck!
Comment from Sam Mendonca
A very interesting chapter bringing the story line to this point.
I am enjoying the story. It has character and suspense.
Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
The artwork is great for the story title.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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A very interesting chapter bringing the story line to this point.
I am enjoying the story. It has character and suspense.
Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
The artwork is great for the story title.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Thank you Sam.
Comment from DonandVicki
I like the rhythm of your well constructed work. You held my attention all the way through. Nice fantasy art work to adorn your story. Don
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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I like the rhythm of your well constructed work. You held my attention all the way through. Nice fantasy art work to adorn your story. Don
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Thank you Don.
Comment from Gungalo
Oh oh, poor Nathan. He's in for a real time of it. Although I figure he will come out of it alright. Wonderful continuity Amahra.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Oh oh, poor Nathan. He's in for a real time of it. Although I figure he will come out of it alright. Wonderful continuity Amahra.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Thank you, my dear.
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Smile.
Comment from Antoine Charlemaine
Hello, amahra. This is the first time I have read any of your work, and I am rather delighted. I am coming into this story mid-plot, which is always dangerous, but immediately I have a good feel for the characters in this chapter. I need to go back and read previous posts. Your descriptive prowess brings your characters to live; makes them living, breathing people. For eg.,
'She was a short, bulky woman, with sun-tanned skin and soft blue eyes. She kept her mixed grey and red hair up in a bun. Her worn grey dress was covered with a navy blue waist apron that was streaked with flour.' This is a great cameo.
I enjoyed the way the chapter concluded. The tension is palpable! Trouble is brewing in paradise!
Thanks for a good read. Antoine.
PS I would have given this six stars, but my quota is depleted, alas. Consider yourself six-starred, my friend.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Hello, amahra. This is the first time I have read any of your work, and I am rather delighted. I am coming into this story mid-plot, which is always dangerous, but immediately I have a good feel for the characters in this chapter. I need to go back and read previous posts. Your descriptive prowess brings your characters to live; makes them living, breathing people. For eg.,
'She was a short, bulky woman, with sun-tanned skin and soft blue eyes. She kept her mixed grey and red hair up in a bun. Her worn grey dress was covered with a navy blue waist apron that was streaked with flour.' This is a great cameo.
I enjoyed the way the chapter concluded. The tension is palpable! Trouble is brewing in paradise!
Thanks for a good read. Antoine.
PS I would have given this six stars, but my quota is depleted, alas. Consider yourself six-starred, my friend.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, my dear for this high rating. I love it when readers point out what they liked and you did that. I really appreciate the comments and glad you enjoyed the chapter. Oh please do go back and read. I'd be most flattered.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Writingfundimension
A wonderfully complicated chapter, Amahra. I really admire your ability to evoke such powerful visual imagery with your writing. The details really flesh out the storyline for me. I'm happy that Grace is clueless at this point. Hopefully, her husband can keep his resolve! Most enjoyable.
Warm regards, Bev
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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A wonderfully complicated chapter, Amahra. I really admire your ability to evoke such powerful visual imagery with your writing. The details really flesh out the storyline for me. I'm happy that Grace is clueless at this point. Hopefully, her husband can keep his resolve! Most enjoyable.
Warm regards, Bev
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much Bev. I don't know how you writers on here do it. But writing a book is HARD work. I've learned so much from good writers like you. I really mean that.
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I'm inspired by good authors like yourself, Amahra. Really, you have a knack for bringing a natural sense to your story - like a person looking at real life. Yes, it is hard work, but the rewards when you get better and people notice is really addicting for me.
:0) Bev
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Ah, bless you for that compliment. It means a lot.
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:0) xxx
Comment from c_lucas
It looks like Nate is going to be busy with animals during the day and women at night. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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It looks like Nate is going to be busy with animals during the day and women at night. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Thank you Charlie for keeping up with my story.
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You're welcome, Amahra. Charlie