Short Form Poetry
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Comment from ProjectBluebook
Like a mirage, Mikey. Does look bewitchin' Some planets have multiple moons like Jupiter and Saturn. That Jupiter keeps the junk from passing through.Devours it like a monster before the frags reach our gravity. Didn't see this contest. It meets the parameters. Coming first. This is the first one I reviewed of this contest variety today. You are the first. Later Lion King.
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Like a mirage, Mikey. Does look bewitchin' Some planets have multiple moons like Jupiter and Saturn. That Jupiter keeps the junk from passing through.Devours it like a monster before the frags reach our gravity. Didn't see this contest. It meets the parameters. Coming first. This is the first one I reviewed of this contest variety today. You are the first. Later Lion King.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
Comment from Sasha
I've said this in two previous reviews: I am not a poet and couldn't tell the difference between a Satori and a Lamborghini. That said, you have done a very nice job with this one. Excellent imagery too.
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I've said this in two previous reviews: I am not a poet and couldn't tell the difference between a Satori and a Lamborghini. That said, you have done a very nice job with this one. Excellent imagery too.
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2014
Comment from catch22
Hi Michael, I'm admittedly not a short form expert, but I have read that two of the lines in a haiku must be grammatically connected as part of the rules for the form. I like the nature imagery very much--very haunting--only would try to figure out a way to connect two of the lines...
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Hi Michael, I'm admittedly not a short form expert, but I have read that two of the lines in a haiku must be grammatically connected as part of the rules for the form. I like the nature imagery very much--very haunting--only would try to figure out a way to connect two of the lines...
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2014