Writings From the Heart
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Comment from Emily George
The first love, beautiful and tender as your lines
Great end rhyming and alliteration.
A very moving piece of work.
Your choice of photo complimented your poem.
I likes the white nights reference.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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The first love, beautiful and tender as your lines
Great end rhyming and alliteration.
A very moving piece of work.
Your choice of photo complimented your poem.
I likes the white nights reference.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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thank you Emily
Comment from JavaJunkie
This is a sweet poem... It feels like it's written straight from the heart in pure words that have a ring of truth in their simplicity. Love the line about the disco... It added a light hearted fell:)
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This is a sweet poem... It feels like it's written straight from the heart in pure words that have a ring of truth in their simplicity. Love the line about the disco... It added a light hearted fell:)
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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thank you Java for your review
Comment from rrabinow
Wonderful love poem that you wrote. I like that it is from the heart. I like the rhyme scheme that you use. I like all the feeling that your poem has. Great job.
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Wonderful love poem that you wrote. I like that it is from the heart. I like the rhyme scheme that you use. I like all the feeling that your poem has. Great job.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
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Thank you Rrabinow
Comment from Leineco
Very nicely done. A trip into memory's melancholy. Bright memories of youthful forays into love, complicated by the sting of rejection. White satin knights singing haunted melodies.
Very enjoyable read :-)
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Very nicely done. A trip into memory's melancholy. Bright memories of youthful forays into love, complicated by the sting of rejection. White satin knights singing haunted melodies.
Very enjoyable read :-)
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
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again thank you for this Leineco
Comment from RGstar
Lovely. I loved this...was it longer it would have my six and in part does have.
A lovely rhetoric write though the questions will never be answered. I think you include ''The Moody Blues'' Night in white Satin as your love song, and how many hearts are formed or broken to that song, yet it lives on in memories as the one haunting factor...good or bad.
Lovely write,
best wishes,
RGstar
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Lovely. I loved this...was it longer it would have my six and in part does have.
A lovely rhetoric write though the questions will never be answered. I think you include ''The Moody Blues'' Night in white Satin as your love song, and how many hearts are formed or broken to that song, yet it lives on in memories as the one haunting factor...good or bad.
Lovely write,
best wishes,
RGstar
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
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thank you RSstar
Comment from chasennov
Chapter 47 of the book Writings From the Heart First Love
"CareFree Days of Summer" If you did this for fun then I'm interested to know how much fun it was to do. An excellent poem you have created here. Well done.
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Chapter 47 of the book Writings From the Heart First Love
"CareFree Days of Summer" If you did this for fun then I'm interested to know how much fun it was to do. An excellent poem you have created here. Well done.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Some one asked me to write a fun poem and keep away from the deepend so I sat and started writing 20 minutes later this is what came out we all sat around and smiled then started to remember first loves being in the 60s it was fun to go back in time, mine was Stefani from London she was 16 I was 14 lol
Thanks for your review. gary
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You are most welcome, Gary.
Comment from MissMerri
I love nostalgia poems! This is a really good one, written with random rhyme, a great romantic feeling and enough questions to make the reader feel a part of the story. I enjoyed this very much. Yes, I remember. ;p
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I love nostalgia poems! This is a really good one, written with random rhyme, a great romantic feeling and enough questions to make the reader feel a part of the story. I enjoyed this very much. Yes, I remember. ;p
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
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Thank you for this MissMerri
Comment from Malerie
Another very emotional and heartfelt piece. I enjoy reading your works and your artwork selections really bring life to you work. Thanks for sharing.
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Another very emotional and heartfelt piece. I enjoy reading your works and your artwork selections really bring life to you work. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
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Thank you for your review
Gary
Comment from skye
Innocent and carefree, those endless summer days, first romance, first love. No one ever forgets. It becomes part of who we are, these moments from our past.
Excellent. Great art choice.
First kiss real awkward -- maybe -- awkward first real kiss?
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Innocent and carefree, those endless summer days, first romance, first love. No one ever forgets. It becomes part of who we are, these moments from our past.
Excellent. Great art choice.
First kiss real awkward -- maybe -- awkward first real kiss?
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
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Thanks Skye
Comment from Dawn Munro
I found this romantic poem to be so wistful, and the sentiment is somewhat melancholy - I do hope that the loved one remembers, as those are the memories to treasure...
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I found this romantic poem to be so wistful, and the sentiment is somewhat melancholy - I do hope that the loved one remembers, as those are the memories to treasure...
Comment Written 11-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014
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Thank you
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My pleasure.