Along the Jericho Road
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Comment from Green Lake Girl
Bev, this is a fitting and well-written conclusion to your thriller. I shall dearly miss this story and your unique characters. You've masterfully portrayed demonic possession, the Native American culture, and law enforcement at its best and worst. This riveting story is a serious page turner. Congratulations on finishing your book. I look forward to seeing this on bookstore shelves one day! ð???ð???ð???ð???ð???ð???
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Bev, this is a fitting and well-written conclusion to your thriller. I shall dearly miss this story and your unique characters. You've masterfully portrayed demonic possession, the Native American culture, and law enforcement at its best and worst. This riveting story is a serious page turner. Congratulations on finishing your book. I look forward to seeing this on bookstore shelves one day! ð???ð???ð???ð???ð???ð???
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Marietta, thank you for being so many things for me during this novel. You've been a great cheerleader, someone to bounce ideas off, and always a champion for the project. I hope you know how very much I appreciate you. :) Bev
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You probably wonder what the gibberish is at the end of this review. It was supposed to be this:
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Oh, mystery solved! How sweet are those stars, my kind-hearted friend. xx Bev
Comment from CHIGYSISKI
I LIKE THIS ACTION STORY.THE CONVERSATIONS ARE VERY INTENSE WITH PUNCTUATION MARKS THAT ARE ON POINT. IT MAKES FOR AN INTRIGUING READ AND ONE IS LEFT WANTING TO FOLLOW UP WITH THE CONCLUDING CHAPTERS.WELL DONE!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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I LIKE THIS ACTION STORY.THE CONVERSATIONS ARE VERY INTENSE WITH PUNCTUATION MARKS THAT ARE ON POINT. IT MAKES FOR AN INTRIGUING READ AND ONE IS LEFT WANTING TO FOLLOW UP WITH THE CONCLUDING CHAPTERS.WELL DONE!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, Chigysiski. I really appreciate your generous and encouraging review. My novel is coming down to one more post, but I am working on editing and hoping to get it published. Thanks so much for stopping by to read. Warm regards, Bev
Comment from Aussie
Pity they didn't understand the difference between bi-polar and demonic possession back in the old days. I will buy this book when you are published. Interesting how closely aligned are religion and the devil. A female James Patterson - you! Smudging does work as does salt at the doorways. Wonderful story-telling, brim full of magic, colour, pain, joy, and you sure are one talented person! ****** six virtual stars cause I don't have any real ones.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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Pity they didn't understand the difference between bi-polar and demonic possession back in the old days. I will buy this book when you are published. Interesting how closely aligned are religion and the devil. A female James Patterson - you! Smudging does work as does salt at the doorways. Wonderful story-telling, brim full of magic, colour, pain, joy, and you sure are one talented person! ****** six virtual stars cause I don't have any real ones.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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Kay, you are such a sweet lady. Thank you so very much for all you've done to support and encourage me through the writing of this novel. Your insights, comments and helpful suggestions have all contributed to my improvement as a storyteller. I am honored by your words that mean just as much to me as a sky full of stars, my friend. Hugs, Bev
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Oooh...you made me all fuzzy! Bev, I look forward to your published book my friend. Happiness always - Love, Kay XXX
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Love you, too, Kay. xxxOOO Bev
Comment from Jay Squires
I want to know why this didn't come up on my messages.
Wow, Bev, this is a dynamic chapter. The old grammar cop in me was on duty, but couldn't find any SPAG. The content critic in me doffs his hat for a tale well told.
Now, I'm going back to re-fan you. I still can't figure out why I wasn't notified.
Have a superb week-end!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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I want to know why this didn't come up on my messages.
Wow, Bev, this is a dynamic chapter. The old grammar cop in me was on duty, but couldn't find any SPAG. The content critic in me doffs his hat for a tale well told.
Now, I'm going back to re-fan you. I still can't figure out why I wasn't notified.
Have a superb week-end!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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Jay, I'm truly honored by your wonderful review and comments. Thank you ever so much for all your help and encouragement for this novel. It's been both inspiring and heart-warming.
:) Bev
Comment from Drew Delaney
I could see no SPAG problems, writingfundimension. You write well with good dialogue and also you use description effectively. This seems to be a good story you have going on here. I like the different terms you use to signify that it is definitely understood. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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I could see no SPAG problems, writingfundimension. You write well with good dialogue and also you use description effectively. This seems to be a good story you have going on here. I like the different terms you use to signify that it is definitely understood. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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Hi, Drew. Thanks for coming on board with this chapter. I'm at the end of the road, so to speak, but still appreciate your insights and encouragement. Now, months of editing before I pitch it.
Warm regards, Bev
Comment from lindalcreel
At least the priest and the girl survived the blast. Poor Rick -- he was possessed by a demon and couldn't help himself. Some of us believe they are out there wrecking havoc on our everyday lives, but our faith always seems to get us through another day. Great chapter. Looking forward to the epilogue.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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At least the priest and the girl survived the blast. Poor Rick -- he was possessed by a demon and couldn't help himself. Some of us believe they are out there wrecking havoc on our everyday lives, but our faith always seems to get us through another day. Great chapter. Looking forward to the epilogue.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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Lindal, thank you so very much. We see the effects of evil every day, and yet we want to think it's mental illness or misguided thinking. It's nice to know we are on the same page on the subject. So glad you enjoyed the chapter. Warm regards, Bev
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My pleasure:)
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for the pleasure of another well written chapter and pulls us readers into the action and tugs at our emotions and sympathies for others. Great job. :-)
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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Thanks for the pleasure of another well written chapter and pulls us readers into the action and tugs at our emotions and sympathies for others. Great job. :-)
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Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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Thank you! I am honored by your excellent and most encouraging review. Appreciate it.
:) Bev
Comment from c_lucas
I know the Apache way of morning. Since they we cousins with thd Navajo, I am some what familiar with their acts of Grief. I am assuming the Sioux would be similar. I glad you kept Jana's grief to the cutting of her hair. T sixer is well earned. I'm impress.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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I know the Apache way of morning. Since they we cousins with thd Navajo, I am some what familiar with their acts of Grief. I am assuming the Sioux would be similar. I glad you kept Jana's grief to the cutting of her hair. T sixer is well earned. I'm impress.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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Hi, Charlie. Thank you for being a wonderful support system for me throughout the novel, my friend. I'm glad you like this 'ending'. I thought a long time about how I would, as a reader, want to see it, and it's gratifying that you approve. That means a lot to me! :) Bev
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You're welcome, Bev. Charlie
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, writingfundimension, I am sorry to see this draw to a close as I have enjoyed watching this story grow along with you. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to the start of another book.
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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this is very well written, writingfundimension, I am sorry to see this draw to a close as I have enjoyed watching this story grow along with you. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to the start of another book.
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Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2014
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Thanks so much, Sweet. Your support has meant a lot to me, and I do have another project ready to start after the Epilogue is posted. Blessings, Bev