2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "haiku (money tree in spring)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
54 total reviews
Comment from honeytree
I really love what you have written here
The art work is really special and so
beautifully presented.I love the money tree
to look at and would love to have one
Honey tree
I have no six left
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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I really love what you have written here
The art work is really special and so
beautifully presented.I love the money tree
to look at and would love to have one
Honey tree
I have no six left
Comment Written 10-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Thank you very much for the review.
Comment from Sis Cat
This is a fun and refreshing haiku that made me smile and say "Aha." You have a delicate use of words and a vivid use of language. This was a pleasure to read. I wish you success in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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This is a fun and refreshing haiku that made me smile and say "Aha." You have a delicate use of words and a vivid use of language. This was a pleasure to read. I wish you success in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Thank you very much for the review.
Comment from inside echo
Well done. I didn't know there was such a thing as a real money tree... I love its "trunk"? How tall does it get? Your poem is great. What do you mean by "leaning to the right"? Your 5-7-5 is spot on. Great write. Thank you for sharing.
tgc
echo
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Well done. I didn't know there was such a thing as a real money tree... I love its "trunk"? How tall does it get? Your poem is great. What do you mean by "leaning to the right"? Your 5-7-5 is spot on. Great write. Thank you for sharing.
tgc
echo
Comment Written 10-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Hello, I have money tree in my house and it leans to the right, I observed when I was writing, it is just what it means, no double meaning, just an observation. The money trees are more plant than tree, mine is about 3 or 4 feet tall. Thank you inside echo, I appreciate your review.
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You are welcome. Thank you for answering my questions. It is a nice looking, neat plant...pretty.
thank you
tgc
echo
Comment from bard owl
I had never heard of the kind of money tree you describe. It is one of those interesting little bonsai trees. I had to read it a couple of times to make sure the last line wasn't a political statement. This is one of those poems that is informative as well as artistic. Thank you for the botany lesson.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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I had never heard of the kind of money tree you describe. It is one of those interesting little bonsai trees. I had to read it a couple of times to make sure the last line wasn't a political statement. This is one of those poems that is informative as well as artistic. Thank you for the botany lesson.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Yes, is not political, it is just a plant called the money tree and mine leans to the right, I observed while I was writing, it is an observation. Thank you for your review.
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your nature Haiku poem. It is well written and it flows well. I like your artwork choice and your last sentence.
Angel123
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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I enjoyed reading your nature Haiku poem. It is well written and it flows well. I like your artwork choice and your last sentence.
Angel123
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Thank you Angel, I appreciate your review.
Comment from w.j.debi
Not only is this a well written haiku, it is also educational. I like learning new things. I had no idea there was a planet called a money tree and certainly no idea how to to take care of it. This poem would have made a great entry in a contest. An excellent presentation all around.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Not only is this a well written haiku, it is also educational. I like learning new things. I had no idea there was a planet called a money tree and certainly no idea how to to take care of it. This poem would have made a great entry in a contest. An excellent presentation all around.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Thank you wj debi, I appreciate your review.
Comment from Gloria ....
Gypsy this is actually a good haiku with the satori line at the beginning. The subscript can most definitely be political in nature in that those with money lean toward the right - right wing, republican, conservative.
That is the beauty of haiku, then can be interpreted differently even if it was not the author's intention. I call it the truth of the Universe's drama.
Good one!
Gloria
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Gypsy this is actually a good haiku with the satori line at the beginning. The subscript can most definitely be political in nature in that those with money lean toward the right - right wing, republican, conservative.
That is the beauty of haiku, then can be interpreted differently even if it was not the author's intention. I call it the truth of the Universe's drama.
Good one!
Gloria
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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It is not a political statement, I have a money tree and it leans to the right. It was an observation. Thank you for the review.
Comment from Curly Girly
This is a fine little haiku, which meets the criteria perfectly:
money tree in spring
so easy to grow and feed
leaning to the right
I gather it is a right wing tree?
:)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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This is a fine little haiku, which meets the criteria perfectly:
money tree in spring
so easy to grow and feed
leaning to the right
I gather it is a right wing tree?
:)
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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LOL everybody thinks it's political but the truth is that my money tree was leaning to the right when I was writing the haiku, it was an observation. Thank you curly Girly
Comment from Dawn Munro
What a pretty plant - is this a picture of your money tree? (Can I borrow some money? LOL) Your poem is a perfect syllable count - I'm not sure I get the "aha" moment in the satori though - is it some political statement?
You made me want one of these now. :)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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What a pretty plant - is this a picture of your money tree? (Can I borrow some money? LOL) Your poem is a perfect syllable count - I'm not sure I get the "aha" moment in the satori though - is it some political statement?
You made me want one of these now. :)
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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LOL no, no political statement. My money tree is a plant that I have in my living room and it really was leaning to the right when I was writing this, it was an observation. Thank you for the review and the 5 stars :)
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Oh, well, you're welcome. :)
Comment from misscookie
I like the photo of your plant
Is this a real money tree ?
This is the first I ever heard of it.
You captured my attention from the star.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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I like the photo of your plant
Is this a real money tree ?
This is the first I ever heard of it.
You captured my attention from the star.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 09-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Thank you misscookie :) yes, money trees are real plants
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You're very welcome, I always say as long as I live I will learn something new. LOL.
have a blessed week end.
Cookie