Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Ooooooh this contest entry sizzles :) You have declared yourself as a top competitor.

- excellent iambic pentameter. I forget if the kyrielle sonnet calls for tetrameter or pentameter. No matter, you are rocking that meter of yours.

- nice rhymes

- nice repeating line that blends in well when re-introduced in each stanza.

- nice closing couplet.

I wish you well in the contest. You've got the right stuff here.

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 Comment Written 07-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2016

awe thank you so much!!! what a great review!!! i'm smiling!!

reply by Joy Graham on 07-Oct-2016

I love your smile!

Comment from sandy montgomery

Excellent

Smoothe as silk. Lovely example of the Kyrelle sonnet. I like the way you used font as a way to extend your poetry. It adds character I think. Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 07-Oct-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2016

Thank you Dear sandy!!!