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Antonym Poem Contest

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Comment from LIJ Red
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There has been so much study of how to sell, and subliminal imaging, and mind control, I wonder if the jury system is working anymore. The OJ case, for instance...I digress...excellent antonym poem...

 Comment Written 15-May-2019


reply by the author on 16-May-2019
    Thank you, Red!
Comment from dragonpoet
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Just because someone proclaims to be innocent, it doesn't mean they are. The jury can be right. Let's hope they are not wrong. For it is horrible to send and innocent person to jail.

Good luck and keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 15-May-2019


reply by the author on 16-May-2019
    Thank you, dragonpoet!
reply by dragonpoet on 16-May-2019
    No problem,
    ~dp
Comment from Boogienights
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This is hilarious, and follows the contest prompt. I love the picture you chose, it fits perfectly. You never know what the jury might be thinking.. Lol. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-May-2019


reply by the author on 15-May-2019
    Thanks, Boogie!
Comment from papa55mike
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I love it. This poem is very well-written, and the picture is amazing. I'm still trying to figure out what movie it's from.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 15-May-2019


reply by the author on 15-May-2019
    Mike, thanks for the kind words and generous rating! It appears that it is an actual trial photo, as the royalty-free site it came from states that all persons depicted are no longer living and that there are no estates prohibiting its use.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I'd be worried too if I was innocent and could only see guilty signs in the juries eyes! This is a really good antonym poem, and you have the guilty and innocent words perfect for the two internal lines. Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 15-May-2019


reply by the author on 15-May-2019
    Thank, Sandra!
Comment from Debra White
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Hello :)
Your entry complies with the prompt requirements.
Well written and well presented also.
Good luck in the voting booth.
Best wishes, Debra

 Comment Written 15-May-2019


reply by the author on 15-May-2019
    Thank you, Debra!
Comment from Lobber
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Good afternoon,
I like your idea of using a cliche as the basis for the poem, along with a classic period photograph to add credibility to the poem's premis. - Lobber

 Comment Written 15-May-2019


reply by the author on 15-May-2019
    Thanks, Lobber!
Comment from evesayshi
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In my opinion, clever and humorous in its succinct and striking presentation - definitely a fun poem that doe not require more verse to define its message - fully compliant with the prompt - best of luck in the contest with this little gem...

 Comment Written 15-May-2019


reply by the author on 15-May-2019
    Thank you, Eve!
reply by evesayshi on 15-May-2019
    You're very welcome...Eve
Comment from Gail Denham
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Good job with this form. And surely the prosecutor and defender watch closely the eyes of the jury. So far, I've never served, but don't think they'd choose me anyway as on some things, I have a strong opinion.
Nice poem.

 Comment Written 15-May-2019


reply by the author on 15-May-2019
    Thanks, Gail.
Comment from victor 66
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Would you say this is a "hung jury"? Or, is a jury that should be hung? You have a good choice of antonyms, good rhyme with a humorous statement as well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-May-2019


reply by the author on 15-May-2019
    Thank you, Victor!
reply by victor 66 on 16-May-2019
    You are most welcome, mystery writer.