Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Diana L Crawford
This challenge has brought out some beautiful winter work, and this a finer one among them. Love the socks in toes! I feel the chilly outdoors and the cozy inside and the idea of snuggling with the spouse! xoxo
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This challenge has brought out some beautiful winter work, and this a finer one among them. Love the socks in toes! I feel the chilly outdoors and the cozy inside and the idea of snuggling with the spouse! xoxo
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
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Diana, thank you!
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My pleasure always!
Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed your fun Cole's Rhythm poem! You chose very good rhymes and the advice to keep "socks on toes" is very important. I have socks on!
"keeping matches dryer" (drier) A "dryer" is the appliance. "Drier" is the comparative form of the adjective, "dry."
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Enjoyed your fun Cole's Rhythm poem! You chose very good rhymes and the advice to keep "socks on toes" is very important. I have socks on!
"keeping matches dryer" (drier) A "dryer" is the appliance. "Drier" is the comparative form of the adjective, "dry."
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
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Oops, thanks much!+
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
This sounds very cosy. It was 80 here today. I think we have had 3 days of colder weather in Cen. FL. ={ I prefer my winters much cooler. This is a fun poem and it even made me feel cold for a moment. =]
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This sounds very cosy. It was 80 here today. I think we have had 3 days of colder weather in Cen. FL. ={ I prefer my winters much cooler. This is a fun poem and it even made me feel cold for a moment. =]
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
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Roxanna, not a bad winter day, a cool one for Florida
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Twenty below is no fun but is part of our normal sometimes. I guess this is a call for preparing for calamity. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Twenty below is no fun but is part of our normal sometimes. I guess this is a call for preparing for calamity. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
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Iza, thank you.
Comment from Gloria ....
I have read quite a few of these Cole Rhythms and it is a terrific form. You've got some great lines in here, J and some most innovative rhymes too and cute repeating line.
A pleasure to read and review. :)
Gloria
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I have read quite a few of these Cole Rhythms and it is a terrific form. You've got some great lines in here, J and some most innovative rhymes too and cute repeating line.
A pleasure to read and review. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
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Gloria, thank you!
Comment from Patty Palmer
A nice warm cozy poem for a cold snowy night! Written very well and easy reading. Descriptive words make you almost see what's going on.
Very enjoyable poem!
Have a great evening
Patty
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A nice warm cozy poem for a cold snowy night! Written very well and easy reading. Descriptive words make you almost see what's going on.
Very enjoyable poem!
Have a great evening
Patty
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Patty, thank you!
Comment from susand3022
Hi JLR, I really like your Cole's Rythm poem. I'm not sure where you live that it's that cold... but I'm cold enough here in Southern New England... thanks... but no thanks! :) I like the progression and finally getting to snuggle down with your spouse. :)
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Hi JLR, I really like your Cole's Rythm poem. I'm not sure where you live that it's that cold... but I'm cold enough here in Southern New England... thanks... but no thanks! :) I like the progression and finally getting to snuggle down with your spouse. :)
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
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Susan, thank you, yes New England is bad enough.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your challenge poem, JLR. Your picture is a great choice. Your words flow well with great imagery. Your repeated phrase was fun to read in each verse. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
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I enjoyed your challenge poem, JLR. Your picture is a great choice. Your words flow well with great imagery. Your repeated phrase was fun to read in each verse. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
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Jan, thank you!
Comment from Drew Delaney
Yes, it can be very cold during the winter months. I love the old-fashioned feel of your poem in particular. It seems to portray a time when sitting by the wood fire and cuddling up warm and cozy to a loved one might be a special memory indeed.
I have no idea how to improve this as you have a hearty ser of rules. Nice work!
Drew Delaney
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Yes, it can be very cold during the winter months. I love the old-fashioned feel of your poem in particular. It seems to portray a time when sitting by the wood fire and cuddling up warm and cozy to a loved one might be a special memory indeed.
I have no idea how to improve this as you have a hearty ser of rules. Nice work!
Drew Delaney
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
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Drew, thanks!
Comment from innmint
What a cozy atmosphere you created with this poem! I've never seen this rhyme scheme before and I will definitely be using it for my future poetry as I am a sucker for repetition! Thank you for sharing!
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What a cozy atmosphere you created with this poem! I've never seen this rhyme scheme before and I will definitely be using it for my future poetry as I am a sucker for repetition! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
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Thanks much!