Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from dmt1967
I leaned something lol. Very well thought out poem and very well put together. I like poems that teach me something so, very well done. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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I leaned something lol. Very well thought out poem and very well put together. I like poems that teach me something so, very well done. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the good wishes.
Comment from padumachitta
hi
An interesting style of peotry.
It's a good reflection on ego, on self or not. The art is a good prompt.
It gave me pause to reflect on my sense of, beleif in self, or lack there of. since self is a thought and thoughs are not self...ah...
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hi
An interesting style of peotry.
It's a good reflection on ego, on self or not. The art is a good prompt.
It gave me pause to reflect on my sense of, beleif in self, or lack there of. since self is a thought and thoughs are not self...ah...
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
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Humm.
Comment from Aussie
Loved poem about twinship. In a world of their own. Mirrored personalities. Twinning thoughts. Apart from the single human without a partner so dear. Very nicely written for the contest entry. I wish you well.
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Loved poem about twinship. In a world of their own. Mirrored personalities. Twinning thoughts. Apart from the single human without a partner so dear. Very nicely written for the contest entry. I wish you well.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
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Aussie, wow! Thank you, thank you!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
WOW! I like the way your poem begins--with an eight-syllable word!
Your Teacup Dictionary entry is very well done and expressive. You have met the prompt requirements.
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WOW! I like the way your poem begins--with an eight-syllable word!
Your Teacup Dictionary entry is very well done and expressive. You have met the prompt requirements.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I've never seen one of these before. 20 letters??? How did you ever find such a word and then poetically define it? Very clever. You word you have chosen and the concepts which follow it coincide with what I was reading from Eckhart Tolle today. He was talking about being one with all that is. Our mind will not let it happen because it divides, label, judges and blocks that sense of oneness. Kind of cool huh?
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I've never seen one of these before. 20 letters??? How did you ever find such a word and then poetically define it? Very clever. You word you have chosen and the concepts which follow it coincide with what I was reading from Eckhart Tolle today. He was talking about being one with all that is. Our mind will not let it happen because it divides, label, judges and blocks that sense of oneness. Kind of cool huh?
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
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Ahh...Eckhart, my favorite of current Sages of Wisdom.
Comment from June Sargent
You did an excellent job with this challenge! And the artwork mirrored your words. I never knew there were so many 20 letter words out there! They should use them on spelling bees...
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You did an excellent job with this challenge! And the artwork mirrored your words. I never knew there were so many 20 letter words out there! They should use them on spelling bees...
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
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June, I would agree. The list provided were daunting just to pronounce.
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
You did a great job with the teacup poem! It's not an easy challenge. "Indistinguishability" was a good choice and you narrowed it down line by line, by syllable, very artfully.
The bottom line works. I turned my screen to landscape, and it does look like a teacup.
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You did a great job with the teacup poem! It's not an easy challenge. "Indistinguishability" was a good choice and you narrowed it down line by line, by syllable, very artfully.
The bottom line works. I turned my screen to landscape, and it does look like a teacup.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
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Mary Kay, it is pretty cool, I was surprised also.
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting 20 letter word poem you have penned for your Teacup Dictionary contest. You used very good words and very interesting imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very interesting 20 letter word poem you have penned for your Teacup Dictionary contest. You used very good words and very interesting imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
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Teri, thanks for the good wishes.
Comment from Therese Caron
Great poem, Beautiful tea cup dictionary poem. The list in this type of poem is beautiful. It says the same thing and so many different ways. This type of poem is hard to write when you were in about syllables, letters, words, etc.
Lovely poem, lovely words, gorgeous picture. Thanks for sharing this.
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Great poem, Beautiful tea cup dictionary poem. The list in this type of poem is beautiful. It says the same thing and so many different ways. This type of poem is hard to write when you were in about syllables, letters, words, etc.
Lovely poem, lovely words, gorgeous picture. Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your teacup dictionary poem! I like it. You could even omit the first line which is the same as the title. But either way, it works. Best wishes in the contest!!
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Great job with your teacup dictionary poem! I like it. You could even omit the first line which is the same as the title. But either way, it works. Best wishes in the contest!!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
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Thank you!