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Heart Cafted Poems - 2020

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Musings of an old man -2020

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Comment from Mastery
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So nice of you, Jim. How kind to consider everyone on the site this time of year, and especially with all of the tough stuff going on for all of us. Merry Christmas dear friend. Stay safe and have a great writing New year! Bob

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
    Bob, the very same and very best this holiday has to offer.
reply by Mastery on 21-Dec-2020
    Thank you, Jim. Bob
Comment from Polly Dolly
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Well done on this rictameter! I like so many of your word choices - peppermint drops, twinkling, sparkle... And I liked peppermint drops leading into tree tops for a little winky rhyme within. Greeting received!

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
    Thank you for your kind comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Roctameter and Christmas greetings to all FanStory friends. It seems this way is the most popular way to send greetings to all our friends in future.

Merry Christmas to you and your family too.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
    Sandra, the very same and very best this holiday has to offer.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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I totally agree that there are so many nice writers and friendly people here at FanStory. I got a lot of work done here and have written 52 poem that I will never dream of writing.

Merry Christmas!

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
    Lisa, same to you!
Comment from Boogienights
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You have made my Christmas much brighter with your wonderful list of the best elements of Christmas. Sometimes we forget about all we have to be happy about. Thanks so much. :)

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You included all the Christmas cheer here in your rictameter and your presentation has all the elements of Yuletide joy, those sugared plumbs sound delicious, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
    Thank you Merriest of Yuletide Joys!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This rictameter, Yuletide, has the proper formatting and has all the cheery elements including mom getting dad ripe for the cap-and-kerchief tango.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
    Smiling back!
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello JLR, a marvelous Monday morning to you, I hope this finds you safe and well. While my Christmas scene may differ from yours, your poem definitely evokes the Christmas spirit. Good job and happy holidays to you and your family

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
    We experience holidays on the Highest and Best that the seasons can offers us on our own little worlds. So, my friend! May you rejoice knowing the there is a reason for the season and that all of our 2021 days will become better and better. Happy Yuletide!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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Your words mirror my thoughts. It has been quite an upsetting year and yet with FanStory, it has been more than tolerable. Let's say it has been
a 'Writing Year.' Thank God for all of you.

Ralf

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
    You Ralf, are among the best among FanStory.
reply by Raffaelina Lowcock on 21-Dec-2020
    Wow! Thank you. You are prominent on my list as well.

    Ralf
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is a Very nicely written poem. How nice for your fanstory companions. Yes a year to put in a rear view mirror for sure won't end soon enough. Pray for a better year ahead. Nicely done. Merry Christmas. ð???

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
    Joanne thank you for the time -- you spent to read and comment on this poem, Merry Christmas to you!