Comment from Rick Gardner

Excellent

This will take everyone to that dental chair, open wide, don't move, swallow this. Best not to try and talk, a mouthful of water prevents any noise, prevents any complaints. Stare at the ceiling, wait for the end. Pay a handsome amount before you leave, you are scheduled for another cleaning in six months, Next.

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 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024

Thanks, Rick. Torture every six months..

reply by Rick Gardner on 30-Nov-2024

Can't believe anyone likes going to the dentist. Had my share of death in a dental chair.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Oh my goodness Paul, this sounds like an awful experience and I hope this is fiction. I hate having my teeth cleaned as I sometimes feel like I am choking. Your poem is well rhymed with great metre and is enjoyed your skilful poem, I wish I had a six left, love Christine x x x

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 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024

Thanks, Christine. Since they started to use the high speed drills, things haven't been quite so bad.