Another Pretty Face
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Comment from zoocq
Another wonderfully written chapter...I keep waiting for Cassie to come home and for Joe and Sara to move forward. Thank you for writing through your fatigue...I support you through your chemo...God Bless.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Another wonderfully written chapter...I keep waiting for Cassie to come home and for Joe and Sara to move forward. Thank you for writing through your fatigue...I support you through your chemo...God Bless.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate the support.
Comment from dportwood
barbara.wilkey,
Your writing is superb chapter after chapter. I holds the readers interest and leaves him hungry for more - the true mark of good writing. Blessings and Prayers.
Duane
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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barbara.wilkey,
Your writing is superb chapter after chapter. I holds the readers interest and leaves him hungry for more - the true mark of good writing. Blessings and Prayers.
Duane
Comment Written 31-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Connie P
Perfectly written and very intense. I'm getting really nervous for Cassie's safety. It will probably take a miracle but I hope she makes it back safely.
Continue to hang in there!!!
Connie
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Perfectly written and very intense. I'm getting really nervous for Cassie's safety. It will probably take a miracle but I hope she makes it back safely.
Continue to hang in there!!!
Connie
Comment Written 31-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from dmjones
Hi Barbara, the chapter is also suspenseful. The dialogue made it fast-paced. Really well done.
Just one thing:
then (glanced/looked)back at Sara standing in the door.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Hi Barbara, the chapter is also suspenseful. The dialogue made it fast-paced. Really well done.
Just one thing:
then (glanced/looked)back at Sara standing in the door.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Thank you for catching that for me. I had made a change there and still left out a word. I appreciate your eagle eye.
Comment from Gungalo
Your story proceeds with great flair!! Such wonderful details here make it alive and happening. You definitely have the knack and talent for writing such a tale. Bravo, don't stop now.
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Your story proceeds with great flair!! Such wonderful details here make it alive and happening. You definitely have the knack and talent for writing such a tale. Bravo, don't stop now.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
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My pleasure, poet. Write on!!!
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My pleasure, poet. Write on!!!
Comment from lola29
I can really feel the tension in the air, and the wait would be more than I could stand. Sara is very courageous, but what I can't understand is why she thinks Joe would harm her or her daugther after all he's doing to try and find her, and he has treated her with so much love.
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I can really feel the tension in the air, and the wait would be more than I could stand. Sara is very courageous, but what I can't understand is why she thinks Joe would harm her or her daugther after all he's doing to try and find her, and he has treated her with so much love.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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SHe's worried because of his job he is used to violence. She thinks it may carry over to his everyday life. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from M.L. Gardner
You show the strain on Sara and Joe's relationship well. Her martered attitude is somewhat bothersome, I sort of expected her to stand up and be strong for this nightmare, but thats her personality I suppose. Dialog continues to smooth out with each chapter. I enjoyed this.
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You show the strain on Sara and Joe's relationship well. Her martered attitude is somewhat bothersome, I sort of expected her to stand up and be strong for this nightmare, but thats her personality I suppose. Dialog continues to smooth out with each chapter. I enjoyed this.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Sara will come out of this much stronger. She is growing. Thank you for your review.
Comment from bhogg
Hi Barbara - you always write with incredible tension. It was so apparent in this posting. Of course, edited to the tee. I'm sending a virtual hug :) LOL, Bill
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Hi Barbara - you always write with incredible tension. It was so apparent in this posting. Of course, edited to the tee. I'm sending a virtual hug :) LOL, Bill
Comment Written 31-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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I just received the hug. Thank you, I needed it.
Comment from Writeaway...
Arms open here barbara, don't worry it will all go away very soon, another fantastic add to your novel babara, I would never have guessed you would have had an illness with the amount of effort your putting into your writing, thumbs up!! :)
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Arms open here barbara, don't worry it will all go away very soon, another fantastic add to your novel babara, I would never have guessed you would have had an illness with the amount of effort your putting into your writing, thumbs up!! :)
Comment Written 31-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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My novel is already complete before I ever started posting. All I do is edit. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from patwannabe
Just keep going, honey. I greatly admire your courage and stamina. So glad your chemo went well. The bright side:try a bunch of wigs in all colors and styles. That'll be fun. I prayed for you Thursday. Will continue to do so when you come to my mind. pat
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Just keep going, honey. I greatly admire your courage and stamina. So glad your chemo went well. The bright side:try a bunch of wigs in all colors and styles. That'll be fun. I prayed for you Thursday. Will continue to do so when you come to my mind. pat
Comment Written 31-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your encouragement. Although, so far hasn't been a piece of cake, I am wondering where the HORRIBLE side effects start.