Another Pretty Face
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Comment from write hand blue
I enjoyed the story line and the style of writing......It leaves you waiting for the next instalement.....A good read....For this I award 5 stars.....
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2010
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I enjoyed the story line and the style of writing......It leaves you waiting for the next instalement.....A good read....For this I award 5 stars.....
Comment Written 29-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and the stars.
Comment from Gooloom
Interesting story. Well written and ina professional manner. Human relationships are well brought out esp. between Joe Sara and the unfortunate Cassie. To day the internet has become an unsafe place and children need to be guided properly onits uses abd abuses! So then? Is Cassie found with her virginity intact or is her young life destroyed? Would like to know more. Gooloom
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2010
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Interesting story. Well written and ina professional manner. Human relationships are well brought out esp. between Joe Sara and the unfortunate Cassie. To day the internet has become an unsafe place and children need to be guided properly onits uses abd abuses! So then? Is Cassie found with her virginity intact or is her young life destroyed? Would like to know more. Gooloom
Comment Written 29-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2010
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The end of the story is just a little over 100 in the future. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from m-alexander
Quite a dark topic for a romance, but these things do happen. This reminded me of a movie where an ex-agent father tries to bring back her daughter, who was taken into the slave trade, similar to this. I forgot the name, but same issue. Good job!
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2010
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Quite a dark topic for a romance, but these things do happen. This reminded me of a movie where an ex-agent father tries to bring back her daughter, who was taken into the slave trade, similar to this. I forgot the name, but same issue. Good job!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Very nice job of building suspense while also discussing romantic feelings. They seen to have the same personalities that adults would have. Of course they are probably with these parents day and night and that is often what keeping children too close can do. Debbie
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2010
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Very nice job of building suspense while also discussing romantic feelings. They seen to have the same personalities that adults would have. Of course they are probably with these parents day and night and that is often what keeping children too close can do. Debbie
Comment Written 29-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from gramalot8
Barbara, very good chapter. I know they are meant for each other and hope it all works out. And, the horribleness of public rape is incredible. Have you resserched this? Does this stuff really go on? Incredible. Keep writing and keep getting better yourself.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2010
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Barbara, very good chapter. I know they are meant for each other and hope it all works out. And, the horribleness of public rape is incredible. Have you resserched this? Does this stuff really go on? Incredible. Keep writing and keep getting better yourself.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2010
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You would be surprised what's goes on. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Readywriter52
Joe is frustrated because none of the leads has led him to Cassie. He wants to comfort Sara, but she ends up comforting him. It sounds like they don't have much time to find her.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2010
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Joe is frustrated because none of the leads has led him to Cassie. He wants to comfort Sara, but she ends up comforting him. It sounds like they don't have much time to find her.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This is a good chapter which flows well. There's quite a lot of tension building, which intrigues the reader and encourages dedication to reading more.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2010
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This is a good chapter which flows well. There's quite a lot of tension building, which intrigues the reader and encourages dedication to reading more.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind reviw.
Comment from Rama Rao
In your last novel, you have taken the drug cartel and its menace; in this you have taken the problems of the Internet, both are very relevant topics today. The way you intertwined them with romance in the story is commendable.
As for this chapter, it is excellent as usual and immaculate. Not even a single word is out of place.
Great job.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2010
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In your last novel, you have taken the drug cartel and its menace; in this you have taken the problems of the Internet, both are very relevant topics today. The way you intertwined them with romance in the story is commendable.
As for this chapter, it is excellent as usual and immaculate. Not even a single word is out of place.
Great job.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind words and continued support.
Comment from Fireshadow
Barbara, another terrific installment for this storyline. The plot continues to evolve in a very interesting fashion, as do the characters. Strong and credible dialogue. Found no spag errors. The artwork is a perfect match for Sara's heartbreak. Very well done, my friend.
Ama
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Barbara, another terrific installment for this storyline. The plot continues to evolve in a very interesting fashion, as do the characters. Strong and credible dialogue. Found no spag errors. The artwork is a perfect match for Sara's heartbreak. Very well done, my friend.
Ama
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from pickthorn
Barbara I enjoyed this chapter of your story. I hope they find Cassie soon, before the video. Looking forward to the next chapter. I'm glad you are over your third treatment and are OK. Hope you had a great Thanksgiving too. Hang in there.
pickthorn
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Barbara I enjoyed this chapter of your story. I hope they find Cassie soon, before the video. Looking forward to the next chapter. I'm glad you are over your third treatment and are OK. Hope you had a great Thanksgiving too. Hang in there.
pickthorn
Comment Written 28-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review,