Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Part two Chapter two"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Helen Tan
I think this is the most graphic of your writing I've read to date. I was stunned by the violence and didn't pick up any SPAG. I'm sure this was tough to write, good job.
Women - the weaker sex, but for our kids we can withstand great torture, horrors. It's hard to imagine why she stays on with him until we are the ones placed into similar situation.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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I think this is the most graphic of your writing I've read to date. I was stunned by the violence and didn't pick up any SPAG. I'm sure this was tough to write, good job.
Women - the weaker sex, but for our kids we can withstand great torture, horrors. It's hard to imagine why she stays on with him until we are the ones placed into similar situation.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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Thank you for the kind review. We will see why she says in the next few chapters.
Comment from patmedium
This came out FAR too near the background that far too many of us come from. I will try to stay with you, Barbara ... but I can't promise to have the guts to stick it out. Mine was long ago, but is still here. Pat.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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This came out FAR too near the background that far too many of us come from. I will try to stay with you, Barbara ... but I can't promise to have the guts to stick it out. Mine was long ago, but is still here. Pat.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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This is the last time Anna gets beaten up this bad. Thank you for your kind review.
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Thanx for the reassurance, dear. xxx
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Barbara:
Other than the content is so horrible to read because I know it happens more than any of us are willing to admit, this came out just fine. Some men are just real bastards and the only way to stop them is to end their lives. This is a superb rendition of what happens. I hope it opens some eyes.
I'm so glad your chemo is over. Good luck in having the doctors figure out what's going on with your potassium and protein levels.
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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Barbara:
Other than the content is so horrible to read because I know it happens more than any of us are willing to admit, this came out just fine. Some men are just real bastards and the only way to stop them is to end their lives. This is a superb rendition of what happens. I hope it opens some eyes.
I'm so glad your chemo is over. Good luck in having the doctors figure out what's going on with your potassium and protein levels.
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
Comment Written 04-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and your support. I appreciate both.
Comment from The Stranger
Once more, your strong storyline and sheer flair that has become your trademark skill draws me into your psyche, and through the excellent story, Written and presented with a level of excelleence
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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Once more, your strong storyline and sheer flair that has become your trademark skill draws me into your psyche, and through the excellent story, Written and presented with a level of excelleence
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from axelbeariter
There was a time (my youth) when I wouldn't have believed your story. In my younger days, I was an alcoholic and yelled a lot before passing out, but I thank God that I have never hit a woman in my condition. After hearing many confessions in the 4,000-plus AA meetings I've been to over the last 33 years of my life without booze, I have heard this scenario over and over. I must assume you are personally familiar with this kind of thing, because for most really human beings it would be pretty hard to conjure up to the light of day--Although it's horrid to read, you've done a super job. I almost felt like jumping into your story and ripping Bobby's balls off.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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There was a time (my youth) when I wouldn't have believed your story. In my younger days, I was an alcoholic and yelled a lot before passing out, but I thank God that I have never hit a woman in my condition. After hearing many confessions in the 4,000-plus AA meetings I've been to over the last 33 years of my life without booze, I have heard this scenario over and over. I must assume you are personally familiar with this kind of thing, because for most really human beings it would be pretty hard to conjure up to the light of day--Although it's horrid to read, you've done a super job. I almost felt like jumping into your story and ripping Bobby's balls off.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate you sharing your story. I am not prepared to state how much experience I have had with this situation.
Comment from amahra
Oh, I was so scared he was going to hurt the baby. When is she going to kill this guy? Sorry, I didn't mean that. But very interesting story. Can't wait for her to get some help. Oh and thanks for saying...penis. lol Glad you health seems improving.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011
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Oh, I was so scared he was going to hurt the baby. When is she going to kill this guy? Sorry, I didn't mean that. But very interesting story. Can't wait for her to get some help. Oh and thanks for saying...penis. lol Glad you health seems improving.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from Deejharrington
How absolutely terrifying! How a "man" can act like that. I will never understand an abuser. She and Bobby have to get out of there before the husband kills one or both of them. It was extremely realistic and well written. It must have been hell to write a scene like that.
deb
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011
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How absolutely terrifying! How a "man" can act like that. I will never understand an abuser. She and Bobby have to get out of there before the husband kills one or both of them. It was extremely realistic and well written. It must have been hell to write a scene like that.
deb
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011
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I did struggle with that scene. It took me most of the summer. I am glad I don't understand abusers. Thank you for you kind review.
Comment from Paradox Tremors
I think it came out pretty well my friend. Anna never had a fighting chance. Bobby needs his own a**-beating if I do say so. I hope Anna gets help before Bobby kills her and her son. Another great chapter.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011
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I think it came out pretty well my friend. Anna never had a fighting chance. Bobby needs his own a**-beating if I do say so. I hope Anna gets help before Bobby kills her and her son. Another great chapter.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Gungalo
Jeesh girl!!! What a chapter. Man if it were me I'd fix that guy good One good hard bite on that member of his would have crippled him. Not to mention a few other jewels well within reach. Sigh men like this should all be incarcerated with each other so they can find out what eing raped is like.
Your story is truly emotive and I was in fear for that baby the whole time. See how you've heightened my awareness for your write.
Excellent writing girl and your detailing of what happens is just amazing!!!
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011
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Jeesh girl!!! What a chapter. Man if it were me I'd fix that guy good One good hard bite on that member of his would have crippled him. Not to mention a few other jewels well within reach. Sigh men like this should all be incarcerated with each other so they can find out what eing raped is like.
Your story is truly emotive and I was in fear for that baby the whole time. See how you've heightened my awareness for your write.
Excellent writing girl and your detailing of what happens is just amazing!!!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words.
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Gosh what a powerful write this is!!!
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, i enjoyed reading this chapter, i hope her hero will come to her rescue soon so she doesn't have to put up with his abuse any more. vivid, full of emotion
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011
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this is very well written, barbara, i enjoyed reading this chapter, i hope her hero will come to her rescue soon so she doesn't have to put up with his abuse any more. vivid, full of emotion
Comment Written 03-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.