Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Part four, Chapter 8"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Chris Tee
It is indeed another great part you have written here Barbara.
This book is getting better every time I read one of your posts.
Well done here old sport.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2011
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It is indeed another great part you have written here Barbara.
This book is getting better every time I read one of your posts.
Well done here old sport.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Rama Rao
The story is moving along nicely. it is, as usual, written in excellent style of yours. The only pity is now we have to wait until the weekend to read the next part. Take care.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2011
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The story is moving along nicely. it is, as usual, written in excellent style of yours. The only pity is now we have to wait until the weekend to read the next part. Take care.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from The Stranger
well things are still happening to Anna that on the surface, appear to be orchestratwd by Bobby, but what role is his mother playing in all this?
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well things are still happening to Anna that on the surface, appear to be orchestratwd by Bobby, but what role is his mother playing in all this?
Comment Written 15-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Hitcher
Just popping in to do some reviewing friend, hope you don't mind? The chapter was self explanatory and gave me a quick glimpse into the previous chapters which was a bonus. It was well written, you created a powerful atmosphere, having the nutcase of mother-in-law ranting and raving as events unfolded. It was a cool chapter, I enjoyed it!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2011
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Just popping in to do some reviewing friend, hope you don't mind? The chapter was self explanatory and gave me a quick glimpse into the previous chapters which was a bonus. It was well written, you created a powerful atmosphere, having the nutcase of mother-in-law ranting and raving as events unfolded. It was a cool chapter, I enjoyed it!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
This post is great. I almost shuddered at the vivid descriptions of Anna's old house. I could almost feel the pain she suffered as a abused wife.
Again her mother-in-law follows the profile for a mother who can see no fault in her son. She is in complete denial and blames Anna for everything.
I feel sorry for her husband. He appears to know what his son is, but has been pushed into submission by his domineering wife. Still he refused to take Bobbie's side about Anna's car.
I applaud the following paragraph:
"Anna has been hiding from your son, so there's no way she could have signed the title." Paul glared at her, then at Eric. "I didn't know Mrs. Rodgers was your co-counselor. If she doesn't butt out, I'll file auto theft and forgery charges first thing Monday morning."
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Mrs, Rogers simply won't drop her verbal assault and even Bobbie's lawyer sees how wrong she is as shown here:
Paul answered his cell. "Yes, this is Paul Sorenson." He listened, then hung up. He looked at Anna. "It was Eric Young. He called to let me know Mrs. Rodgers is investigating how you can afford an expensive attorney."
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Things are heating up as Ann's court action draws near. I doubt that Bobbie or his mother will bo away quietly. I am ready to see what happens next.
I wanted to give you six stars, but FanStory wouldn't let me. I hope you will accept six virtual Irish hugs. They may even have magical powers,
Roger
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2011
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Hi Barbara:)
This post is great. I almost shuddered at the vivid descriptions of Anna's old house. I could almost feel the pain she suffered as a abused wife.
Again her mother-in-law follows the profile for a mother who can see no fault in her son. She is in complete denial and blames Anna for everything.
I feel sorry for her husband. He appears to know what his son is, but has been pushed into submission by his domineering wife. Still he refused to take Bobbie's side about Anna's car.
I applaud the following paragraph:
"Anna has been hiding from your son, so there's no way she could have signed the title." Paul glared at her, then at Eric. "I didn't know Mrs. Rodgers was your co-counselor. If she doesn't butt out, I'll file auto theft and forgery charges first thing Monday morning."
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Mrs, Rogers simply won't drop her verbal assault and even Bobbie's lawyer sees how wrong she is as shown here:
Paul answered his cell. "Yes, this is Paul Sorenson." He listened, then hung up. He looked at Anna. "It was Eric Young. He called to let me know Mrs. Rodgers is investigating how you can afford an expensive attorney."
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Things are heating up as Ann's court action draws near. I doubt that Bobbie or his mother will bo away quietly. I am ready to see what happens next.
I wanted to give you six stars, but FanStory wouldn't let me. I hope you will accept six virtual Irish hugs. They may even have magical powers,
Roger
Comment Written 14-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from writerwish
Wow. Seventy five percent greater risk when they leave. No wonder shelters are so needed. This story is wonderful and I look forward to reading more on the weekends. You are a gifted writer.
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Wow. Seventy five percent greater risk when they leave. No wonder shelters are so needed. This story is wonderful and I look forward to reading more on the weekends. You are a gifted writer.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from axelbeariter
"I didn't know Mrs. Rodgers was your co-counselor. If she doesn't butt out, I'll file auto theft and forgery charges first thing Monday morning."
Mr. Rodgers took his wife's arm and led her away from the men./Nicely setup sequence----You have produced another socko chapter.
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"I didn't know Mrs. Rodgers was your co-counselor. If she doesn't butt out, I'll file auto theft and forgery charges first thing Monday morning."
Mr. Rodgers took his wife's arm and led her away from the men./Nicely setup sequence----You have produced another socko chapter.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from teacherdub
The quality of the book chapters continues with this addition. Barbara, you have laid the foundation for several elements to come in this chapter. Mother-in-law, husband's trickery and threatening tones, etc. Still am anxious to get the next one to see where it will lead. Good luck on the start of another school year and take care. The book is moving along very well in my opinion. td
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2011
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The quality of the book chapters continues with this addition. Barbara, you have laid the foundation for several elements to come in this chapter. Mother-in-law, husband's trickery and threatening tones, etc. Still am anxious to get the next one to see where it will lead. Good luck on the start of another school year and take care. The book is moving along very well in my opinion. td
Comment Written 14-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mumsyone
A good continuing chapter, Barbara. I can't believe it's time for school to start already, but my granddaughter goes back the 17th.
"My son wouldn't forge a signature. That bitch is lying.(")
Paul backed out (of?) the veway.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2011
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A good continuing chapter, Barbara. I can't believe it's time for school to start already, but my granddaughter goes back the 17th.
"My son wouldn't forge a signature. That bitch is lying.(")
Paul backed out (of?) the veway.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review. I will check those areas.
Comment from *erin*
Great chapter. I really do not like Mrs. Rodgers. I think Anna is very strong for leaving her husband. Once again, your chapter had me right from the start. I'm looking forward to reading more. Great job!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2011
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Great chapter. I really do not like Mrs. Rodgers. I think Anna is very strong for leaving her husband. Once again, your chapter had me right from the start. I'm looking forward to reading more. Great job!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.