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Lonely Hearts Meet

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Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.

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Comment from rightforyou
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I enjoyed this work and think that by writing this will help you heal and rebuild your desire to enjoy the benefits of having a man who love you without the drama of some mad man...Ron



 Comment Written 16-Jan-2012

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Comment from robina1978
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This is a very long and nice chapter. They are finally grow closer, which is not easy for both of them. So nice Michael has Troy's parents for grandparents. And in total they had a very rewarding day.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2012

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Comment from ulster3
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Hello, barbara. I just love the ending. The start reminded me I forgot some stuff in the dryer. lol. Then I got hungry for Italian. Thanks for a good read.
Warmly, Rebecca

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2012

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Comment from Espresso momma
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So they even get out for an Italian dinner and catch up on some time. Looks like a promising start ahead. Thanks for sharing this chapter. It was a good one.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2012

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Comment from Chris Tee
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You always manage to build up suspense for the next read Barbara and this is another excellent pert.
Well done indeed with this splendid work we have here ma'am

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2012

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Comment from Dave M
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Barbara,

This is an excellent chapter. I think Troy will kiss Anna, but nothing more will happen. She's just not ready.

I enjoyed this read and have one suggestion:

"As [When] she finished, he was ready for his morning nap." I think "When" is a better word. "As" is too immediate.

Dave

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2012

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    I agree, thank you for the suggestion. I agree Anna isn't ready for anything else. I just hope Troy knows it.
Comment from Joan E.
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Thank you for letting us know that the artwork is your husband's contribution to underscore the theme of an attempt to re-bloom. You very effectively draw your characters realistically, create natural dialog and build suspense. Anna sounds ready to be able to trust again! -Joan

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Comment from robyn corum
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Another good chapter. I don't like the mufflers, though. Scary stuff, writer. I hope everything is okay. Thanks for posting. I enjoyed.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2012

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Comment from The Stranger
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well I think Anna is worth just one little kiss, given all that has passed previously, this story emphasisies just how socially unnacptable abuse of any kind is

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2012

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    Thank you for the kind review and your insight.
Comment from bookishfabler
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First of all, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas and a Happy New Year,a nd you are feeling better.
Your chapter was very realistic, and I am glad to be back around to review some more. I am looking forward to the rest, and I hope my muse comes back to me soon. I miss writing.
hugs Heidi

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2012

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    I hope your muse comes back too. I miss your writing. Thank you for he kind review.
reply by bookishfabler on 16-Jan-2012
    you're welcome