Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "Part three, Chapter 15"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from The Stranger
well things certainly never run smooth for poor Anna, first she gets a gentle but confidence knocking rebuke from Troy, then the ghost that refuses to lie down, once again, rears its ugly head...
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012
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well things certainly never run smooth for poor Anna, first she gets a gentle but confidence knocking rebuke from Troy, then the ghost that refuses to lie down, once again, rears its ugly head...
Comment Written 22-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
Aw -- let them have the kiss. I do understand that Troy wants Anna to heal from her abusive relationship before they get intimately involved, but what guy who really wants a more complete relationship, would turn down a good night kiss?
Now the level of intrigue is rising, with the accusatory phone call, the loud muffler (surely Anna would at least see some vanishing tail lights) and the alarm at Troy's office (was that a distraction to get to leave?).
Short , but entertaining chapter.
Roger
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012
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Hi Barbara:)
Aw -- let them have the kiss. I do understand that Troy wants Anna to heal from her abusive relationship before they get intimately involved, but what guy who really wants a more complete relationship, would turn down a good night kiss?
Now the level of intrigue is rising, with the accusatory phone call, the loud muffler (surely Anna would at least see some vanishing tail lights) and the alarm at Troy's office (was that a distraction to get to leave?).
Short , but entertaining chapter.
Roger
Comment Written 22-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2012
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Thank you for your kind review and your support.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Bar bGreat chapter wish it was longer.
Oh,
I can see what you mean when you said from your reply from my last review about Anna
She, definitely has a lot of drama into her life
between Troy saying she has to get rid of all her demons
And now the horrible mysterious phone call.
Will be waiting for next chapter.
Gert
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Hello Bar bGreat chapter wish it was longer.
Oh,
I can see what you mean when you said from your reply from my last review about Anna
She, definitely has a lot of drama into her life
between Troy saying she has to get rid of all her demons
And now the horrible mysterious phone call.
Will be waiting for next chapter.
Gert
Comment Written 22-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
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You are so welcome
Gert
Comment from Anisa-
I like the way you write, and the descriptions you use. The story is easy to read and all fits together well. I like the picture you chose to put with this as well. Good job.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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I like the way you write, and the descriptions you use. The story is easy to read and all fits together well. I like the picture you chose to put with this as well. Good job.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from hyway94
Guess who';s back. As if I hadn't been gone all that long but it has been about 9.5 months. I see you haven't changed your writing it's still good. I like what I just read. No mistakes and a great flow what more can a writer ask for. Keep it up.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Guess who';s back. As if I hadn't been gone all that long but it has been about 9.5 months. I see you haven't changed your writing it's still good. I like what I just read. No mistakes and a great flow what more can a writer ask for. Keep it up.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Welcome back. I've missed you. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from writerwish
Now that this will end soon, I will miss it. Do you plan on writing a sequel? I feel like the characters are real. This is the best compliment a writer could have.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Now that this will end soon, I will miss it. Do you plan on writing a sequel? I feel like the characters are real. This is the best compliment a writer could have.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your encouraging words.
Comment from bookishfabler
I love that she is getting more assertive. I hope she kicks some butt. Anouther enjoyable chapter, though short. Maybe because I actually have some time this evening to read.Thanks for sharing. Didn'ty see any spags or nits.
hugs HEidi
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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I love that she is getting more assertive. I hope she kicks some butt. Anouther enjoyable chapter, though short. Maybe because I actually have some time this evening to read.Thanks for sharing. Didn'ty see any spags or nits.
hugs HEidi
Comment Written 22-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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you are so welcome
Comment from Janice65
I have enjoyed reading your book, at least parts of it. I really want Anna to regain her self respect. She seems like a character with confidence who can take care of herself. She and Troy seem to be made for each other and a reader can feel the electricity between them. This chapter is so well written and such a good read.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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I have enjoyed reading your book, at least parts of it. I really want Anna to regain her self respect. She seems like a character with confidence who can take care of herself. She and Troy seem to be made for each other and a reader can feel the electricity between them. This chapter is so well written and such a good read.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from teacherdub
Good interest hook at the beginning of this chapter. Troy and Anna's close connection intensifies reader interest. Suspense with the phone call is timed well also. I've been gone about two months. I will have to visit and catch up. td
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Good interest hook at the beginning of this chapter. Troy and Anna's close connection intensifies reader interest. Suspense with the phone call is timed well also. I've been gone about two months. I will have to visit and catch up. td
Comment Written 22-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and welcome back.
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So glad to be back.td
Comment from Belinda
What an exceptional, understanding, and patient man Troy is. One in a million! I think it is hard for Anna to overcome her demons, so the readers have to be as patient as Troy... The phone call is devastating, and this chapter is exciting!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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What an exceptional, understanding, and patient man Troy is. One in a million! I think it is hard for Anna to overcome her demons, so the readers have to be as patient as Troy... The phone call is devastating, and this chapter is exciting!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.