Lonely Hearts Meet
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Comment from dbmccarter
So we have several things coming out not just about Anna but Troy too. Is this the way most abused people have to live there lives? Always looking over their shoulder. If so, you are portraying it very well.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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So we have several things coming out not just about Anna but Troy too. Is this the way most abused people have to live there lives? Always looking over their shoulder. If so, you are portraying it very well.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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Yes, very few people ever get completely get out of abuse. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Allezw2
Lady barbara wilkey,
As you noted in this posting, it is impossible for an individual to watch everywhere.
A deranged, vengeful person is capable of always showing up when least expected.
Only a dedicated watch, around the clock, nearly forever, can prevent such an intrusion.
Electronics help. The new system of surveillance cameras increasingly present in larger cities around the world can help, as witness the London and Madrid bombings as well as the apprehension of the arson suspect here in LA.
It's tough since legal restraints are only print on paper.
Quite a row to hoe, and the emotions are certainly exposed here.
Nicely done,
Fantasist
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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Lady barbara wilkey,
As you noted in this posting, it is impossible for an individual to watch everywhere.
A deranged, vengeful person is capable of always showing up when least expected.
Only a dedicated watch, around the clock, nearly forever, can prevent such an intrusion.
Electronics help. The new system of surveillance cameras increasingly present in larger cities around the world can help, as witness the London and Madrid bombings as well as the apprehension of the arson suspect here in LA.
It's tough since legal restraints are only print on paper.
Quite a row to hoe, and the emotions are certainly exposed here.
Nicely done,
Fantasist
Comment Written 06-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're quite welcome.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
This is another excellent chapter, as the stalker heats up the scare tactics against Anna and puts more pressure on Troy.
You surprised me with the revelation that Troy still had nightmares about the attack on his moter. Now his stolen medical records have been placed on line.
the more the stalkers do to terrorize Troy and Anna, the more clues are left to bring theit identity out.
I feel like the end of their delemma is drawing to a close.
Love and Irish hugs,
Roger
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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Hi Barbara:)
This is another excellent chapter, as the stalker heats up the scare tactics against Anna and puts more pressure on Troy.
You surprised me with the revelation that Troy still had nightmares about the attack on his moter. Now his stolen medical records have been placed on line.
the more the stalkers do to terrorize Troy and Anna, the more clues are left to bring theit identity out.
I feel like the end of their delemma is drawing to a close.
Love and Irish hugs,
Roger
Comment Written 06-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Chris Tee
This is indeed another absolutely wonderful write for us here Barbara old sport. Well done with this splendid pert that we have here ma'am.
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This is indeed another absolutely wonderful write for us here Barbara old sport. Well done with this splendid pert that we have here ma'am.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mara del Mar
Oh, each time more short the chapters! This are about to the end. As you said, Troy also have your own demons, that i wait can beat .
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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Oh, each time more short the chapters! This are about to the end. As you said, Troy also have your own demons, that i wait can beat .
Comment Written 05-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from purrfect tale
I've been holding my breath all week, wondering if something would happen while she waited in her car. This was a good way to work the threat into the story. I didn't start at the beginning, is Troy adopted?
"It() seems my medical records showed up on the Internet today."
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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I've been holding my breath all week, wondering if something would happen while she waited in her car. This was a good way to work the threat into the story. I didn't start at the beginning, is Troy adopted?
"It() seems my medical records showed up on the Internet today."
Comment Written 05-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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Yes, Troy is adopted and it was stated at the beginning of the story. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from gramalot8
Barbara, I can only imagine that Troy would be reliving his past and fighting the resurfacing demons. I hpe it all works out and he and Anna can help each other.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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Barbara, I can only imagine that Troy would be reliving his past and fighting the resurfacing demons. I hpe it all works out and he and Anna can help each other.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Dave M
Barbara,
This is an excellent chapter. Anna got out of this one, and now the cops are getting involved. I know chapters do better if they're sliced into bite-size fragments, but I would've enjoyed reading more on this post. Found nothing to criticize.
Dave
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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Barbara,
This is an excellent chapter. Anna got out of this one, and now the cops are getting involved. I know chapters do better if they're sliced into bite-size fragments, but I would've enjoyed reading more on this post. Found nothing to criticize.
Dave
Comment Written 05-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and continued support.
Comment from ulster3
Hello, barbara.
Can you possibly send betty around to my house? I wouldn't mind if she did a little cooking for me. Poor Troy. The troubles just go on and on. Great write!
Warmly, rebecca
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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Hello, barbara.
Can you possibly send betty around to my house? I wouldn't mind if she did a little cooking for me. Poor Troy. The troubles just go on and on. Great write!
Warmly, rebecca
Comment Written 05-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review, I need Betty too.
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lol. Hugs. R
Comment from AprilShower
Barbara was Troy's father abusive? Did he kill Troy's mother? This leaves me wondering what Troy's medical records would prove. He wasn't guilty of any crime. The guilty person was the one who died of spousal abuse. Good story, Barbara.
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Barbara was Troy's father abusive? Did he kill Troy's mother? This leaves me wondering what Troy's medical records would prove. He wasn't guilty of any crime. The guilty person was the one who died of spousal abuse. Good story, Barbara.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2012
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Troy was adopted and his step-father killed his mother.
Troy witnessed this. Troy has Hep B. This was all mentioned earlier. Thank you for the kind review.
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I already knew about the Hep B, Barbara. I didn't start reading your book at the very beginning. I discovered your writings later. You're welcome.