Expressing Myself
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Vanity Solutions"Writing my way out of depression / mental illness
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Comment from mermaids
You have me laughing here. You have written a humerous poem that pokes fun at aging. I like the line about standing upside down. Good 5-7-5 form here.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2012
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You have me laughing here. You have written a humerous poem that pokes fun at aging. I like the line about standing upside down. Good 5-7-5 form here.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2012
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Glad it gave you a chuckle. Thank you for your kind and generous review!
Comment from teafor2
playinaround--Excellent depiction of a woman's vanity.
This is layed out quite well: 1st line, image presented;
2nd line, pivot; 3rd line, resolution. Has all the nuances
of a Japanese terse form. Satire. teafor2
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playinaround--Excellent depiction of a woman's vanity.
This is layed out quite well: 1st line, image presented;
2nd line, pivot; 3rd line, resolution. Has all the nuances
of a Japanese terse form. Satire. teafor2
Comment Written 29-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind and detailed review!! Glad you liked it!
Comment from donette1914
this picture is to funny! this was very cute and i like where you said standing on my head, very funny! it was a pleasure to read your work
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2012
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this picture is to funny! this was very cute and i like where you said standing on my head, very funny! it was a pleasure to read your work
Comment Written 29-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much donette, for your kind and generous review!
Comment from Bojenn
Clever...
I love the drawing you chose as it states the meaning of your poem.
One question? If she stands on her head, then, gravity is still at work and...?
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Clever...
I love the drawing you chose as it states the meaning of your poem.
One question? If she stands on her head, then, gravity is still at work and...?
Comment Written 29-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2012
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Well, i guess it depends on how busty one is! Thank you so much for your review and for the cute question!
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Just pondering the results of gravity.
:-)
Comment from judiverse
A fun piece, playinaround. Your 5-7-5 count is precise. and the humor is great. Love the title. The image of standing on your head for snapshots is humorous. You might not get your head in the picture at all. Very enjoyable. judiverse
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A fun piece, playinaround. Your 5-7-5 count is precise. and the humor is great. Love the title. The image of standing on your head for snapshots is humorous. You might not get your head in the picture at all. Very enjoyable. judiverse
Comment Written 29-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2012
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Hee hee, I thought of that later. I guess it depends on how busty you are! Thank you so much for your kind review!!
Comment from mauial
Mean old Mr gravity is no friend of the boob, gut and butt cause he drags them down to the ground. Standing on the head that's bit extreme. The pic fits this bit of wit :)
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Mean old Mr gravity is no friend of the boob, gut and butt cause he drags them down to the ground. Standing on the head that's bit extreme. The pic fits this bit of wit :)
Comment Written 29-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much for youre poetic review!! Have a great morning!
Comment from peggles
this was so funny
I liked the idea of being upside down to bring all back where it used to be
What a great idea must try it next time I have a photo
might tip over and make a better shot
I enjoyed this post
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this was so funny
I liked the idea of being upside down to bring all back where it used to be
What a great idea must try it next time I have a photo
might tip over and make a better shot
I enjoyed this post
Comment Written 29-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked my little poem. Have a great morning!
Comment from rjuselius
hahaha. pretty funny. gravity is a woman's worst enemy, although it's not so great for men either.
thank you for sharing!
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hahaha. pretty funny. gravity is a woman's worst enemy, although it's not so great for men either.
thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 29-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind words and generous review!
Comment from Chris Tee
You put a smile on my dial for a while with this witty write that we have here old sport. Well done indeed with this splendid piece here.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2012
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You put a smile on my dial for a while with this witty write that we have here old sport. Well done indeed with this splendid piece here.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much! Glad it put a smile on your face!
Comment from pickelhead
The pic says it all and this is worth five laughing out loud stars. Men have their pot bellies, women, well the poem spells it out very well. Ha Ha
George
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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2012
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The pic says it all and this is worth five laughing out loud stars. Men have their pot bellies, women, well the poem spells it out very well. Ha Ha
George
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Comment Written 29-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2012
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Im so glad you liked my little poem and thank you for the 5 stars! I dare you to write one about men's pot bellies.. Thanks again!