Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 62 "part one, Chapter 19"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Imsharrison
This is the first chapter of your book I have read. I feel I have missed out. This is very well written and powerful. It takes you on a very uncomfortable journey through the often hidden world of domestic violence. It raises the hairs on the back of the neck.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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This is the first chapter of your book I have read. I feel I have missed out. This is very well written and powerful. It takes you on a very uncomfortable journey through the often hidden world of domestic violence. It raises the hairs on the back of the neck.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from TammyGail
Wow..barbara, this was some chapter indeed loaded full of on the edge dialogue, you had my full att from start to end and the end was well that bastard deserved it..Excellent work sweetie it was a pleasure to read your fine writing once again
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Wow..barbara, this was some chapter indeed loaded full of on the edge dialogue, you had my full att from start to end and the end was well that bastard deserved it..Excellent work sweetie it was a pleasure to read your fine writing once again
Comment Written 16-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Barbara:)
The intense action continues with Bobby's anger rising with each move Anna tries to make. To those waiting outside, only Anna's screams indicate that she is still alive and conscious.
when Bobby had Anna open the Patio door and then shoved her outside, the SWAT team finally had a clear shot. I don't think Bobby will ever hurt anyone else.
Now Anna can start ream physical and mental healing without any fear of her ex-husband.
Great Chapter. I can tell that you are nearing the end of the novel.
more love and Irish Hugs for a powerful and realistic story.
Roger
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Hi Barbara:)
The intense action continues with Bobby's anger rising with each move Anna tries to make. To those waiting outside, only Anna's screams indicate that she is still alive and conscious.
when Bobby had Anna open the Patio door and then shoved her outside, the SWAT team finally had a clear shot. I don't think Bobby will ever hurt anyone else.
Now Anna can start ream physical and mental healing without any fear of her ex-husband.
Great Chapter. I can tell that you are nearing the end of the novel.
more love and Irish Hugs for a powerful and realistic story.
Roger
Comment Written 16-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and support.
Comment from Chris Tee
Wow! Barbara this is an action packed part we have here today ma'am. Your conclusion is full of suspense and it leaves the reader with a question... What happened now??
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Wow! Barbara this is an action packed part we have here today ma'am. Your conclusion is full of suspense and it leaves the reader with a question... What happened now??
Comment Written 16-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from writerwish
So very intense and such a great job at keeping things at a fever pitch. I would definitely recommend this book. The narrative of the fight is excellent and I know hard to do, I tried it once.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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So very intense and such a great job at keeping things at a fever pitch. I would definitely recommend this book. The narrative of the fight is excellent and I know hard to do, I tried it once.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Barbara:
The language in this is actually pretty tame for what
someone like Bobby would use. He is an insane, ego-
maniacal male chauvinist with absolutely no couth and
that's my positive comment about him. If he were not so
caught up in his 15 minutes of fame, he would likely
have already killed Anna.
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Barbara:
The language in this is actually pretty tame for what
someone like Bobby would use. He is an insane, ego-
maniacal male chauvinist with absolutely no couth and
that's my positive comment about him. If he were not so
caught up in his 15 minutes of fame, he would likely
have already killed Anna.
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
Horray the bastard is dead! Your chapter is sensational and fast paced. Live by the sword and die by the sword. He fuck face ex was puke, he have redneck-woman-hating-uneducated-hick a bad name. Physical
abusers rarely change because they don't get help. A woman should walk away from all abusive men. Horray for Anne getting in some licks on her stupid hateful ex and a sharp shooter popped her murderous ex. I immensely enjoy your strong narrative voice and excellent detailed writing. I'd recommend your latest chapter to other reviewers to ready. Thank you for entertaining me in with your story telling with your talented pen, my friend. Nice day to you & that's my 2 cents.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Barbara,
Horray the bastard is dead! Your chapter is sensational and fast paced. Live by the sword and die by the sword. He fuck face ex was puke, he have redneck-woman-hating-uneducated-hick a bad name. Physical
abusers rarely change because they don't get help. A woman should walk away from all abusive men. Horray for Anne getting in some licks on her stupid hateful ex and a sharp shooter popped her murderous ex. I immensely enjoy your strong narrative voice and excellent detailed writing. I'd recommend your latest chapter to other reviewers to ready. Thank you for entertaining me in with your story telling with your talented pen, my friend. Nice day to you & that's my 2 cents.
Melissa.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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I love your two cents. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from rheabug
The story is progressing along very nicely. Just as it seems that it goes for so many abused women. Can't wait to read more. Blessings, Linda
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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The story is progressing along very nicely. Just as it seems that it goes for so many abused women. Can't wait to read more. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mara del Mar
Uf! What chapter as intense and emotive! The images was very strong, i seems see all, Anna and Bobby in inside, the others outside... this to be very well done, and seem that at last That ended the nightmare. Excellent chapter, congrats!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Uf! What chapter as intense and emotive! The images was very strong, i seems see all, Anna and Bobby in inside, the others outside... this to be very well done, and seem that at last That ended the nightmare. Excellent chapter, congrats!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Dave M
Barbara,
It looks like Bobby reached the end of the line. I enjoyed this chapter and couldn't find anything to criticize.
Dave
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Barbara,
It looks like Bobby reached the end of the line. I enjoyed this chapter and couldn't find anything to criticize.
Dave
Comment Written 15-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your continued support.