Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "One can say,"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Ridley Williams
Hey GW,
For some reason I get the idea of, "What goes around comes around"... and "...you reap what you sow." Your piece provokes the reader to examine his own actions and their pending results. Wonderful thought, I enjoyed the write. I have a lot of Cherokee blood, and this piece strikes home, well done. Best wishes, Bill
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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Hey GW,
For some reason I get the idea of, "What goes around comes around"... and "...you reap what you sow." Your piece provokes the reader to examine his own actions and their pending results. Wonderful thought, I enjoyed the write. I have a lot of Cherokee blood, and this piece strikes home, well done. Best wishes, Bill
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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Thanks Bill
Comment from SLHarper
There's food for thought. One might also consider, "If my ancestors didn't necessarily accomplish all they might have hoped, or if I disagree entirely with their motives, actions and decisions, then it stands to reason that if I try to do things differently and change my ideologies from those of my ancestors, perhaps I will, indeed, leave a legacy my descendants will be proud of?"
Thanks for taking the time to use correct grammar, which makes your message easier to follow and appreciate.
Steph H.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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There's food for thought. One might also consider, "If my ancestors didn't necessarily accomplish all they might have hoped, or if I disagree entirely with their motives, actions and decisions, then it stands to reason that if I try to do things differently and change my ideologies from those of my ancestors, perhaps I will, indeed, leave a legacy my descendants will be proud of?"
Thanks for taking the time to use correct grammar, which makes your message easier to follow and appreciate.
Steph H.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
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welcome
Comment from Quire's Gal
this isa wonderful statement deepwater and very much true. We have certainly lost the days when elders are respected and ancestors honored.
Thanks so much for posting this and be well yourself.
Drusilla1
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this isa wonderful statement deepwater and very much true. We have certainly lost the days when elders are respected and ancestors honored.
Thanks so much for posting this and be well yourself.
Drusilla1
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
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thank you
Comment from mermaids
I like how this poem asks a question. You give the reader much to think about. I like the line about having pride about our ancestors,it is a theme that deserves to be in a poem. Excellent use of words.
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I like how this poem asks a question. You give the reader much to think about. I like the line about having pride about our ancestors,it is a theme that deserves to be in a poem. Excellent use of words.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
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thank you
Comment from krys123
Deepwater, A very poignant and powerful piece of poetry that at first I found to be very provocative however I found it's
laced with a truism that goes beyond no bounds of reminiscing's of one's ancestors. The picture is somewhat holy and definitely compliments your poem so well. Thank you for sharing and posting this for everyone to meet all your endeavors be good ones.
Alex
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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Deepwater, A very poignant and powerful piece of poetry that at first I found to be very provocative however I found it's
laced with a truism that goes beyond no bounds of reminiscing's of one's ancestors. The picture is somewhat holy and definitely compliments your poem so well. Thank you for sharing and posting this for everyone to meet all your endeavors be good ones.
Alex
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2014
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thanks Alex
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You are indeed welcome my friend
Comment from hari anand
Simple yet powerful In its words, your poem successfully makes a point, or I must say teaches an important lesson of life. Exceptional thought.
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Simple yet powerful In its words, your poem successfully makes a point, or I must say teaches an important lesson of life. Exceptional thought.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
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thanks again
Comment from zanya
A most pertinent question for our times contained herein and one that is difficult to answer - what will remain after this generation hands over to the next - IPods and emails somewhere out there in the ether LOL
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A most pertinent question for our times contained herein and one that is difficult to answer - what will remain after this generation hands over to the next - IPods and emails somewhere out there in the ether LOL
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
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thank you
Comment from Eternal Muse
That is the statement of true wisdom. I hope some of my achievements will be remembered by my descendants (lol). An awesome picture to accompany your thoughts.
This was good.
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That is the statement of true wisdom. I hope some of my achievements will be remembered by my descendants (lol). An awesome picture to accompany your thoughts.
This was good.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
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thank you
Comment from Dawny53
Really got me thinking about my own past, or what I intend to do in the future. The picture you chose took me back to everything I learned as a child, and all the things I wish to do as an adult. I loved it.
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Really got me thinking about my own past, or what I intend to do in the future. The picture you chose took me back to everything I learned as a child, and all the things I wish to do as an adult. I loved it.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
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thank you
Comment from Pili Pubul
As one that is very proud of my ancestors achievements
this poem moved me deeply , they are part of us , and hope we will be a part of our descendants . Meaningful and true. Pili
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As one that is very proud of my ancestors achievements
this poem moved me deeply , they are part of us , and hope we will be a part of our descendants . Meaningful and true. Pili
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
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thank you
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You welcome.