Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "A World of Difficulty"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Delahay
World leaders, and their countries, are after their own agendas. This is pretty much how things have always been and results in eternal conflicts between nations. I don't think anyone would build and ark if the end were coming. There would be no way anyone could decide who would build it, who would be on it, and where it should go.
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World leaders, and their countries, are after their own agendas. This is pretty much how things have always been and results in eternal conflicts between nations. I don't think anyone would build and ark if the end were coming. There would be no way anyone could decide who would build it, who would be on it, and where it should go.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
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thank you
Comment from Heidixoxo
Hello deepwater,
I've been fortunate enough to read some of your work and I'm very impressed. I enjoy your style of writing and think so many of the pieces you've created are great. I apologize for not having a full 6 stars because I would've given it to you. Job nicely done friend. Best of luck to you....xoxo
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Hello deepwater,
I've been fortunate enough to read some of your work and I'm very impressed. I enjoy your style of writing and think so many of the pieces you've created are great. I apologize for not having a full 6 stars because I would've given it to you. Job nicely done friend. Best of luck to you....xoxo
Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
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thank you for this
Comment from vfbryant
I think you have vividly expressed the distress and fear many of us fear as we watch the chaos and pain inflicted by those intent on gaining power over others. I pray God brings humanity back to sanity.
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I think you have vividly expressed the distress and fear many of us fear as we watch the chaos and pain inflicted by those intent on gaining power over others. I pray God brings humanity back to sanity.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
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thanks for this review
Comment from DanielEkine
A very exceptional creativity. With the situation I am facing right about now, I can imagine. Unexpected eviction from my apartment for no reason, this could not have been written at a better time. My best part of the author's work, "Can governing powers find the determination to abort the tyranny shown by race,
What contributions do we as mere mortals project for the salvation of this destiny."
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A very exceptional creativity. With the situation I am facing right about now, I can imagine. Unexpected eviction from my apartment for no reason, this could not have been written at a better time. My best part of the author's work, "Can governing powers find the determination to abort the tyranny shown by race,
What contributions do we as mere mortals project for the salvation of this destiny."
Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
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thank you for your review and the six you gave
Gary
Comment from GWinterwin
This is a good poem with lots of truth in it. Also a good picture. Good word flow and rhyming make it easy to read and understand. Yes it all makes you wonder what is coming next.
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This is a good poem with lots of truth in it. Also a good picture. Good word flow and rhyming make it easy to read and understand. Yes it all makes you wonder what is coming next.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
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thank you for this GW
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Yes definitely ponder where life should or shouldn't go. the next years follow a likely determine this. Well written. Thank you, my friend~Debbie
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Yes definitely ponder where life should or shouldn't go. the next years follow a likely determine this. Well written. Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
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thank you Debbie
Comment from MM lives on :)
Hello poet , you make a strong point for the end of time my friend, as the world turns our internal questions battle our answers, ponder that? well done!
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Hello poet , you make a strong point for the end of time my friend, as the world turns our internal questions battle our answers, ponder that? well done!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
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thank you
Comment from INtity
Tyrants have drugged mankind in the past and will continue! Excellent work! I enjoyed this social thought with ease. Thanks for sharing!
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Tyrants have drugged mankind in the past and will continue! Excellent work! I enjoyed this social thought with ease. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Bobby Jo
This is something deep to consider. It feels as if we are on the slope of falling off a deep cliff. Yet hope remains. This is good.
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This is something deep to consider. It feels as if we are on the slope of falling off a deep cliff. Yet hope remains. This is good.
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Thank you
Comment from Drew Delaney
Are the dominating powers set on re-creation
Just like Hitler wanted to create a perfect race and get rid of the Jews. It's not even civilisation anymore. Too many Hitler types in the world. Is there time to rebuild an ark? It must be commissioned or it wouldn't save part of mankind.
This is really thought provoking, deepwater. Is that why you are called by this name?
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Are the dominating powers set on re-creation
Just like Hitler wanted to create a perfect race and get rid of the Jews. It's not even civilisation anymore. Too many Hitler types in the world. Is there time to rebuild an ark? It must be commissioned or it wouldn't save part of mankind.
This is really thought provoking, deepwater. Is that why you are called by this name?
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
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Thank you