Ten Acorns Grew Upon an Oak
rhyming counting poem119 total reviews
Comment from rosehill (Wendy)
So many lessons for ten little acorns. Expectation, fear, hopes, the realities of nature and the circle of life. I'm sure Sawyer will contemplate those another time. For now I'd bet he just has fun counting along with you. - Wendy
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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So many lessons for ten little acorns. Expectation, fear, hopes, the realities of nature and the circle of life. I'm sure Sawyer will contemplate those another time. For now I'd bet he just has fun counting along with you. - Wendy
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much, Wendy :-) Brooke
Comment from Tatarka2
at first, I thought this was a little tedious (which makes it perfect for small children). The last stanza grabbed me, though. Now, it has the catchy rhyme, the characters kids love (the acorns) AND a lesson and a moral at the end. As usual, so well doje.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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at first, I thought this was a little tedious (which makes it perfect for small children). The last stanza grabbed me, though. Now, it has the catchy rhyme, the characters kids love (the acorns) AND a lesson and a moral at the end. As usual, so well doje.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Tatarka, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is another of your fun counting poems although it is on a more positive and less scary theme. I like the rhyme and the countdown as each acorn meets its demise until just the one is left. However, that one becomes the next generation. Good "twist". I enjoyed reading and thinking of all the ways you stated about each one as it disappeared. I like the picture. We have many squirrels who plant pecans all over, so one never knows where a pecan tree emerges. Good job and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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This is another of your fun counting poems although it is on a more positive and less scary theme. I like the rhyme and the countdown as each acorn meets its demise until just the one is left. However, that one becomes the next generation. Good "twist". I enjoyed reading and thinking of all the ways you stated about each one as it disappeared. I like the picture. We have many squirrels who plant pecans all over, so one never knows where a pecan tree emerges. Good job and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much, Tatarka :-) Brooke
Comment from Dawn Munro
Aw, poor little last acorn...sigh...but then again, to become a tree is such a lofty fate! (*evil grin* - LOL) As usual, charming and a sweet delight, my friend - as usual!!!
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Aw, poor little last acorn...sigh...but then again, to become a tree is such a lofty fate! (*evil grin* - LOL) As usual, charming and a sweet delight, my friend - as usual!!!
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Thank you, Dawn :-) Brooke
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem is nuts! (humor) I enjoyed the descending fortunes of the oak seeds and the brilliant sowing of the last acorn into the soil for the future.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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This poem is nuts! (humor) I enjoyed the descending fortunes of the oak seeds and the brilliant sowing of the last acorn into the soil for the future.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Bill, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from mermaids
After reading this poem,all I think about is my backyard with the acorns and the squirrels. This is a fun poem and I like how the acorns are the subject. Love the line about the acorn getting evicted.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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After reading this poem,all I think about is my backyard with the acorns and the squirrels. This is a fun poem and I like how the acorns are the subject. Love the line about the acorn getting evicted.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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thank you, Elaine, for your thoughtful response to my poem :-) Brooke
Comment from SteveY
Another beautiful little story conveyed in this poem. Perfect rhythm, rhyme, and captivating in its presentation. Makes one want to continue to read and read.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Another beautiful little story conveyed in this poem. Perfect rhythm, rhyme, and captivating in its presentation. Makes one want to continue to read and read.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Steve, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from flamingstar
Love these counting poems. I tried to write one with border collies but can't get it to work. I know how you enjoy killing things off so I was glad to see it end on a note of hope and renewal!
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Love these counting poems. I tried to write one with border collies but can't get it to work. I know how you enjoy killing things off so I was glad to see it end on a note of hope and renewal!
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much, flamingstar :-) Brooke
Comment from Just2Write
Another fun counting poem, and one with a good ending too, as the acorn will become another oak tree. Squirrels and jays inadvertently plant thousands of them each year.
Love the ways you find for each of your chosen ten to disappear. Always innovative and clever. Rose.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Another fun counting poem, and one with a good ending too, as the acorn will become another oak tree. Squirrels and jays inadvertently plant thousands of them each year.
Love the ways you find for each of your chosen ten to disappear. Always innovative and clever. Rose.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Rose, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Gladness
I really like the ending showing the last getting burred to grow a new tree. You start with a storm and later a swing and a bird's nest. Sounds like you go through the year of seasons. Well done.
Anita
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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I really like the ending showing the last getting burred to grow a new tree. You start with a storm and later a swing and a bird's nest. Sounds like you go through the year of seasons. Well done.
Anita
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
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Anita, thanks so much :-) Brooke