A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Anonymity"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
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Comment from adewpearl
stunning presentation
strong rhyming couplets
excellent use of alliteration
love the allusion to the Donner party
boy, you really shouldn't piss off the wrong people, huh?
LOL
powerful threats that scare the bejesus out of me :-)Brooke
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stunning presentation
strong rhyming couplets
excellent use of alliteration
love the allusion to the Donner party
boy, you really shouldn't piss off the wrong people, huh?
LOL
powerful threats that scare the bejesus out of me :-)Brooke
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
OOoooowwww -- I'm glad it's
not me you're after, Dean.
You are such a natural at driving fear into
one's soul -- great poem.
Margaret
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OOoooowwww -- I'm glad it's
not me you're after, Dean.
You are such a natural at driving fear into
one's soul -- great poem.
Margaret
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from Just2Write
Anonymous souls, are mostly cowards. So many folks have found a wonderful way to exercise their mean-streaks and frustrations via the inter-net. It's a phase I hope that won't last long.
Another great rant, Dean. The poem bounces along with a heaping spoonful of menace and meter. A fun read, even if it was meant to chide someone who over-stepped their bounds.
Rose.
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Anonymous souls, are mostly cowards. So many folks have found a wonderful way to exercise their mean-streaks and frustrations via the inter-net. It's a phase I hope that won't last long.
Another great rant, Dean. The poem bounces along with a heaping spoonful of menace and meter. A fun read, even if it was meant to chide someone who over-stepped their bounds.
Rose.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from JJ Rowe
Most excellent and frightening as always! You are such a great story teller, though terrifying :) The way you point the reader out makes it more personal and connected. Another nice job!
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Most excellent and frightening as always! You are such a great story teller, though terrifying :) The way you point the reader out makes it more personal and connected. Another nice job!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
AAAAhhhh the master again.
Oh I love to read your pieces as they sing.
I don't know how you can be so magnificient in your writing over and over but I am forever your student
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AAAAhhhh the master again.
Oh I love to read your pieces as they sing.
I don't know how you can be so magnificient in your writing over and over but I am forever your student
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from Tomes Johnston
I don't know why, but I believe that this could be a continuation of your previous poem about reviewers. Yes, they hide behind their anonymity all right. This is yet another excellent poem. Well done.
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I don't know why, but I believe that this could be a continuation of your previous poem about reviewers. Yes, they hide behind their anonymity all right. This is yet another excellent poem. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from rod007
Your friend is sure on a quest to squash you so you squirm as you're his worm. There is no relief for you as you cower in fear, but at least your friend drank and ate well. I wonder how many other victims he has in his lair or more importantly how many fanstorians will enjoy his sharp teeth. Well done, Dean.
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Your friend is sure on a quest to squash you so you squirm as you're his worm. There is no relief for you as you cower in fear, but at least your friend drank and ate well. I wonder how many other victims he has in his lair or more importantly how many fanstorians will enjoy his sharp teeth. Well done, Dean.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from royowen
Very well written Dean, I truly admire your poetic and artistic talent, and this fine example of how to write horror poems, in rhyming rhythmic poetry is unsurpassed, nice format, in which you also do well is great, well done, blessings, Roy.
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Very well written Dean, I truly admire your poetic and artistic talent, and this fine example of how to write horror poems, in rhyming rhythmic poetry is unsurpassed, nice format, in which you also do well is great, well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from Linda Engel
GROSS. and pity the guy who ticked you off. creepy. Obviously the person didn't know you. You give us nightmares (and we love you for it). But get 'em , Dean, we can't have someone hounding you with criticism or low stars. Push him to the floor and bite his ears off and throw them to the dogs. A pox upon his soul. Hell knows no furry like a Dean scorned.
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GROSS. and pity the guy who ticked you off. creepy. Obviously the person didn't know you. You give us nightmares (and we love you for it). But get 'em , Dean, we can't have someone hounding you with criticism or low stars. Push him to the floor and bite his ears off and throw them to the dogs. A pox upon his soul. Hell knows no furry like a Dean scorned.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Romans 14:11-12 don't critize and blame others, God sees all.
So someone bullied you and called you names. Maybe, they need to keep their opinions in their mouth and vent by writing their own awareness stories. We need freedom to write, talk and soar like eagles.
The power of words will help or harm. Good poem of venting and repenting Dean.
1 Thess 4:9 You excell in your stories. Press on brother!
flylikeaneagle
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Romans 14:11-12 don't critize and blame others, God sees all.
So someone bullied you and called you names. Maybe, they need to keep their opinions in their mouth and vent by writing their own awareness stories. We need freedom to write, talk and soar like eagles.
The power of words will help or harm. Good poem of venting and repenting Dean.
1 Thess 4:9 You excell in your stories. Press on brother!
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015