Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "The Buckle"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from Alan K Pease
You have written this poem from a man's point of view shared by a woman who was the object of his love/passions. Excellent rhyme, rhythm, a little varied in meter but the verses play out well - an easy flow. I don't think I could ever want to ride a bull either.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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You have written this poem from a man's point of view shared by a woman who was the object of his love/passions. Excellent rhyme, rhythm, a little varied in meter but the verses play out well - an easy flow. I don't think I could ever want to ride a bull either.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments. Appreciate them very much.
Comment from Eric1
Hi bmwhsd, I thoroughly enjoyed reading these brilliant lyrics, They are more than lyrics though, in the words of the old Johnny Tilletson song they are 'Poetry in Motion'!
Great rhyming, brilliant rhythm and a wonderful flow serve to lift this above the rest my friend.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Hi bmwhsd, I thoroughly enjoyed reading these brilliant lyrics, They are more than lyrics though, in the words of the old Johnny Tilletson song they are 'Poetry in Motion'!
Great rhyming, brilliant rhythm and a wonderful flow serve to lift this above the rest my friend.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your generous comments. Appreciate them very much.
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It really was a pleasure to review my friend
Comment from Ulla
I did like that. I have always been fascinated by rodeos as well. Being a horse rider much of my life, I wouldn't even contemplate it. I admire those who does though. Your poem brought it very much alive. ulla
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I did like that. I have always been fascinated by rodeos as well. Being a horse rider much of my life, I wouldn't even contemplate it. I admire those who does though. Your poem brought it very much alive. ulla
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
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Comment from Megalips
You realize of course, the timely nature of this, given the movie recently released. When I started reading, I had to think you had just walked out of the theater! And I love this story...sad, but beautifully put together...never did my interest wax from the page. I think the rhyme is good. It does remind me a bit of a country song.
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You realize of course, the timely nature of this, given the movie recently released. When I started reading, I had to think you had just walked out of the theater! And I love this story...sad, but beautifully put together...never did my interest wax from the page. I think the rhyme is good. It does remind me a bit of a country song.
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
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Thanks for the compliment. Three years ago when I originally wrote these lyrics they were written as Country music lyrics. So, appreciate your comments.
Comment from bizzygirl
AWESOME. This is so beautiful, and although about a cowboy it could be about anyone and their lost love. I adore the imagery. I used to work at a truck stop where many drivers wore big belt buckles so it is a tongue in cheek smile on my face.
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AWESOME. This is so beautiful, and although about a cowboy it could be about anyone and their lost love. I adore the imagery. I used to work at a truck stop where many drivers wore big belt buckles so it is a tongue in cheek smile on my face.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your comments. Appreciate them very much.