Comment from amahra

Excellent

I'm really learning a lot about haiku poems. I didn't know that they can be in any form as long as its 17 syllables long. Loved the wording of the poem and thought it was a great job.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015

Thank you amahra :)
Haiku is a very precise art. It has to be 17 syllables or less in the short/long/short format. They have to be simple and the first two lines have to be connected, the third line is an aha moment, something that makes you think.... there are many other rules but I don't want to overwhelm you. It is a fun poem form and after you do a few is not as hard as it sounds. Oh! I almost forgot, you need a reference to the weather, like in mine is rainy weather.

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

The final line brought a smile to my face. The leaf having fun as it plays its final game.
tag, you're it.
We might as well enjoy each second of life that we are given.

Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 16-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015

Thank you Debi, I am glad someone got it. :)