Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Tina Crute
Your poem makes winter not sound so bad! It has a warm feel to it, like toasty warm, away from the cold. Thanks for sharing this new(to me) poem pattern!
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Your poem makes winter not sound so bad! It has a warm feel to it, like toasty warm, away from the cold. Thanks for sharing this new(to me) poem pattern!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
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Tina, thank you!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written poem you have penned for the Potlatch Poetry club - Cole's Rhythm. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very interesting and well written poem you have penned for the Potlatch Poetry club - Cole's Rhythm. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
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Teri, thanks much!
Comment from Fonda Little
I loved how you repeated the phrase, "socks on toes", at the end of each stanza! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
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I loved how you repeated the phrase, "socks on toes", at the end of each stanza! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
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thanks..
Comment from RShipp
Well done with your composition of a Cole's Rhythm.
Each of your stanza's created a very visual picture.
I liked the line you chose as your ending line for each stanza "socks on toes".
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Well done with your composition of a Cole's Rhythm.
Each of your stanza's created a very visual picture.
I liked the line you chose as your ending line for each stanza "socks on toes".
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
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Thank you it was a new style to me and fun.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello JLR!
Well, I can most certainly relate as the winter storms here in northern Michigan call for wearing socks and more!
Love the images you create in your well-crafted verse.
The rhythm of your offering flows easily/naturally.
I had visions of my grandfather reciting this piece = wonderful!
Thank you!
diane
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Hello JLR!
Well, I can most certainly relate as the winter storms here in northern Michigan call for wearing socks and more!
Love the images you create in your well-crafted verse.
The rhythm of your offering flows easily/naturally.
I had visions of my grandfather reciting this piece = wonderful!
Thank you!
diane
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
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Diane, thank you have a frat weekend!
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, excellent piece in poetic form. Keep it up! Anything to do with cold weather usually send chills down my spine. Have never experienced a snow environment but I can imagine the terrible moments. Creative work in few words and good English command.
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Hi, excellent piece in poetic form. Keep it up! Anything to do with cold weather usually send chills down my spine. Have never experienced a snow environment but I can imagine the terrible moments. Creative work in few words and good English command.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the review and comments.
Comment from LeannaP
This was beautifully written. Your lines flowed nicely throughout.
It was rather picturesque.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
Thank you for sharing!
Happy new year!
Leanna
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This was beautifully written. Your lines flowed nicely throughout.
It was rather picturesque.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
Thank you for sharing!
Happy new year!
Leanna
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
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Leanna, thank you and may your new year be filled with extra-ordinary and wonderful discoveries.
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Thank you and you're welcome
Comment from Dancemom
This is a sweet poem appropriate for the winter season. I enjoyed your rhyming pattern and flow very much. Your words paired perfectly with the picture you chose. Great job and thank you for sharing.
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This is a sweet poem appropriate for the winter season. I enjoyed your rhyming pattern and flow very much. Your words paired perfectly with the picture you chose. Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
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Heather, I am pleased for your kind review.
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
Great poem that meets the difficult requirements of this prompt. The rhyme and rhythm are perfect. I enjoyed reading your piece. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. ~Brenda
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Great poem that meets the difficult requirements of this prompt. The rhyme and rhythm are perfect. I enjoyed reading your piece. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. ~Brenda
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
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Brenda, thank you for your review and kind words.
Comment from Sugarray77
Wow J... a great job on this Coles Rhythm... it seems so very complicated, yet you made it look easy. I think its too hard for me... :). Great job answering this prompt in style.
Melissa
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Wow J... a great job on this Coles Rhythm... it seems so very complicated, yet you made it look easy. I think its too hard for me... :). Great job answering this prompt in style.
Melissa
Comment Written 03-Jan-2020
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Melissa, thank you. What a great tribute to the FS creator. I enjoyed this complex style.