Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "The soul of a soldier"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from daymanrayne
This poem is very cool and it was one of my favorites. If you knew one of the ones who defends our country then I salute them sire
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This poem is very cool and it was one of my favorites. If you knew one of the ones who defends our country then I salute them sire
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thanks
Comment from Ntorious
The title definitely was well picked. It is an attention grabber.
The words flowed across the page with passion and truth.
Visions flooded painting pictures of what was written
The words used projected emotion and description.
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The title definitely was well picked. It is an attention grabber.
The words flowed across the page with passion and truth.
Visions flooded painting pictures of what was written
The words used projected emotion and description.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2010
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thank you
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you are welcome
Comment from annettebda
This is a new experience for me bit I really liked this work. It has a strong and compelling voice and speaks with wisdom, Thank you
Annette
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This is a new experience for me bit I really liked this work. It has a strong and compelling voice and speaks with wisdom, Thank you
Annette
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thank you
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A very good write it is written with passion and feeling it has imagery and flows well, and it held my attention right to the finish. I enjoyed reading it and Thanks for sharing it with me.
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A very good write it is written with passion and feeling it has imagery and flows well, and it held my attention right to the finish. I enjoyed reading it and Thanks for sharing it with me.
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thank you
Comment from R.Selvey
I like this -Congrats to you-and your contribution for humanity!Such value in your poem.For all who are with us,and,those who forever live in our mind,hearts and souls.He whom and who rings freedom threw-out the land,believe' in liberty and justice for all! Amen-God Bless
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I like this -Congrats to you-and your contribution for humanity!Such value in your poem.For all who are with us,and,those who forever live in our mind,hearts and souls.He whom and who rings freedom threw-out the land,believe' in liberty and justice for all! Amen-God Bless
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thank you
Comment from Maxine Kendall
Your poem will touch many this November, both veterans and the loved ones of those who didn't make it home.
It is a good read and obviously heartfelt and should make all question the choice of war.
I wonder if the 2nd word of the 2nd line might read better as 'that' instead of 'for'. Just a thought!
Well done.
Maxine
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Your poem will touch many this November, both veterans and the loved ones of those who didn't make it home.
It is a good read and obviously heartfelt and should make all question the choice of war.
I wonder if the 2nd word of the 2nd line might read better as 'that' instead of 'for'. Just a thought!
Well done.
Maxine
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thanks Maxine
Comment from pickthorn
deepwater..... I think this is a great poem and very appropriate for Veteran's Day tomorrow, to honor all of those who fought for our freedom and especially to those who paid the ultimate sacrifice. It is heartfelt and your emotions are apparent. Thank you for sharing it with us.
pickthorn
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deepwater..... I think this is a great poem and very appropriate for Veteran's Day tomorrow, to honor all of those who fought for our freedom and especially to those who paid the ultimate sacrifice. It is heartfelt and your emotions are apparent. Thank you for sharing it with us.
pickthorn
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thank you
Comment from rosah
important message in this poem, will we learn from our past, will our soldiers deaths be in vain, will we continue to repeat the pattern of war??????? great poem, thank you for sharing, peace be with you.
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important message in this poem, will we learn from our past, will our soldiers deaths be in vain, will we continue to repeat the pattern of war??????? great poem, thank you for sharing, peace be with you.
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thank you
Comment from Jen Gentry
You have written this from your heart and it rings true to me, I thank you for this powerful and well done eyeopening poem, Wow, I can only give a virtual six for this, dang it I have spent them all for this week :0( and by the way you look like my Dad up on his tractor, but I am sure he is much older then you are now. excuse me when I say screw the grammar and keep writing from your heart that is what makes a writer, right. Great Job.
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You have written this from your heart and it rings true to me, I thank you for this powerful and well done eyeopening poem, Wow, I can only give a virtual six for this, dang it I have spent them all for this week :0( and by the way you look like my Dad up on his tractor, but I am sure he is much older then you are now. excuse me when I say screw the grammar and keep writing from your heart that is what makes a writer, right. Great Job.
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thanks for reading
Comment from Spiritual Echo
I think in the name of liberty rather than "for lberty would flow better.
This is both a strong and very gentle submission and very timely/ Tomorrow, in Canada at least, it is Remberance Day. At the 11th hour on the 11th day in the 11th month the nation stops for two minutes to honour our fallen.
Great poetry.
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I think in the name of liberty rather than "for lberty would flow better.
This is both a strong and very gentle submission and very timely/ Tomorrow, in Canada at least, it is Remberance Day. At the 11th hour on the 11th day in the 11th month the nation stops for two minutes to honour our fallen.
Great poetry.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2010
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thank you