Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Fields of stone,"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
Howdy Mr. Deepwater,
I like yer style. I found nothing unenjoyable about your post but I think it was the eighth or ninth line where you mentioned God but didn't use a capital H with him. Personally, that sort of thing isn't a hitch for me, but since you did use the proper, cap H in the rest of the body of the post, I could only assume you'd want to know you missed one. I would.
Good post~
Pea
reply by the author on 19-May-2010
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Howdy Mr. Deepwater,
I like yer style. I found nothing unenjoyable about your post but I think it was the eighth or ninth line where you mentioned God but didn't use a capital H with him. Personally, that sort of thing isn't a hitch for me, but since you did use the proper, cap H in the rest of the body of the post, I could only assume you'd want to know you missed one. I would.
Good post~
Pea
Comment Written 19-May-2010
reply by the author on 19-May-2010
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well good morning Ms Sweet Pea, first your very welcome and second thank you for reading this,, Gary
Comment from dportwood
deepwater,
He leaves for the battlefield knowing full well that a field of stone may be the place where he goes to eternal rest with his name carved on one of the stones perhaps.
Duane
reply by the author on 19-May-2010
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deepwater,
He leaves for the battlefield knowing full well that a field of stone may be the place where he goes to eternal rest with his name carved on one of the stones perhaps.
Duane
Comment Written 19-May-2010
reply by the author on 19-May-2010
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Thanks for reading Duane
Comment from laren
This is a great poe which tell us about the unconditional love of God, He is willing to forgive our sins, sometimes we need fall to be raised.
Congratulations!
Laren
reply by the author on 19-May-2010
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This is a great poe which tell us about the unconditional love of God, He is willing to forgive our sins, sometimes we need fall to be raised.
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 19-May-2010
reply by the author on 19-May-2010
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thank you Laren
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Thank you for sharing,
Laren
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good flow, good meter, good form, a wonderful picture. this is a wonderful tribute to our fallen soldiers and the ones we wish to return home safely
reply by the author on 19-May-2010
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this is very well written with good flow, good meter, good form, a wonderful picture. this is a wonderful tribute to our fallen soldiers and the ones we wish to return home safely
Comment Written 19-May-2010
reply by the author on 19-May-2010
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thank you sweet
Comment from M. Karol
Its a new way of addressing the graveyard. But the one dying is calm, having faith in the almighty but worries for his kith and kin. well brought out, deepwater.
Madhvi
reply by the author on 19-May-2010
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Its a new way of addressing the graveyard. But the one dying is calm, having faith in the almighty but worries for his kith and kin. well brought out, deepwater.
Madhvi
Comment Written 19-May-2010
reply by the author on 19-May-2010
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Thank you Madhvi
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
Very well written- being said by someone who is dying? Beautiful, meaningful words. Hope this is not really your own reflections? Thanks so much for sharing- You have an extremely great talent! Betty
reply by the author on 19-May-2010
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Very well written- being said by someone who is dying? Beautiful, meaningful words. Hope this is not really your own reflections? Thanks so much for sharing- You have an extremely great talent! Betty
Comment Written 18-May-2010
reply by the author on 19-May-2010
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thank you so much for your review and comments Betty GW
Comment from Kingsland
This was a poem about a graveyard as far as I could ascertain by its poetic verve. I liked the way you wrote this piece of poetic art. It was just a pleasure to have read and written a review for... John
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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This was a poem about a graveyard as far as I could ascertain by its poetic verve. I liked the way you wrote this piece of poetic art. It was just a pleasure to have read and written a review for... John
Comment Written 18-May-2010
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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thank you John for reading this and the review
Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi deepwater,
Fields of Stone an exceptional poem. The rhyme and flow are very good and your meaning clear. And yes, God does have the control. I wish I had those 6 stars as this is a very deserving write. A pleasure to read and review. Thank you for sharing.
Becky
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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Hi deepwater,
Fields of Stone an exceptional poem. The rhyme and flow are very good and your meaning clear. And yes, God does have the control. I wish I had those 6 stars as this is a very deserving write. A pleasure to read and review. Thank you for sharing.
Becky
Comment Written 18-May-2010
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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thank you, Becky for reading
Comment from Deejharrington
A touching and sincere tribute to those who gave their lives for our country. To most of us, just names on a wall at the cementary. To others, fathers, sons, husbands. We should never forget the people they were.
deb
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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A touching and sincere tribute to those who gave their lives for our country. To most of us, just names on a wall at the cementary. To others, fathers, sons, husbands. We should never forget the people they were.
deb
Comment Written 18-May-2010
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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thank you D J for reading
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you're welcome
deb
Comment from geoniasha
This is truly a powerful write. 'Fields of stone'...where so many have been and have returned and where many have left their loyalties, their broken bodies sent home to grieving loved ones. I cannot begin to express my admiration for those who give their all and sometimes pay the ultimate price protecting what is right. Thank you so much for sharing this poignant piece. geo
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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This is truly a powerful write. 'Fields of stone'...where so many have been and have returned and where many have left their loyalties, their broken bodies sent home to grieving loved ones. I cannot begin to express my admiration for those who give their all and sometimes pay the ultimate price protecting what is right. Thank you so much for sharing this poignant piece. geo
Comment Written 18-May-2010
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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your welcome geo and thank you for reading
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You're welcome. geo