Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Chapter 15; part one"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from RKagan
I laughed when I read your author notes because Sara has made this entire journey difficult for Joe. These last eleven pages will be interesting. I pray for your health my friend. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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I laughed when I read your author notes because Sara has made this entire journey difficult for Joe. These last eleven pages will be interesting. I pray for your health my friend. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Sara has to stay in character, right? (LOL) I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
I wish I had started reading this delightful book from the start
This chapters sounds like a girl's wedding day a dream.
Smiles
Gert
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Hello Barb
I wish I had started reading this delightful book from the start
This chapters sounds like a girl's wedding day a dream.
Smiles
Gert
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
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You are welcome Barb
Hope you saw my rating.
Gert
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I did. You are a blessing.
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You are so welcome
See you later
Gert
Comment from bowls
All my best wishes go out to you. Thanks for another wonderful chapter. The wedding plans look perfect. I wish Sara would just say yes. Two little things; "Joe watched Sara FINISHED eating." (finish) and "I haven't read newspaper "(THE). Can't wait for the big wedding!!!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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All my best wishes go out to you. Thanks for another wonderful chapter. The wedding plans look perfect. I wish Sara would just say yes. Two little things; "Joe watched Sara FINISHED eating." (finish) and "I haven't read newspaper "(THE). Can't wait for the big wedding!!!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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I have made those corrections. Thank you for catching them.
Comment from swosugrad09
How exciting! This sounds like a picture perfect wedding. I hope Sara hurries up and says yes! I can't wait to read more. Well done.
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How exciting! This sounds like a picture perfect wedding. I hope Sara hurries up and says yes! I can't wait to read more. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from lola29
Joe is, I think, every woman's dream. He is truly the epitome of romance. But, I'm wondering if Sara is going to say yes. If not, a buzillion of us will.
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Joe is, I think, every woman's dream. He is truly the epitome of romance. But, I'm wondering if Sara is going to say yes. If not, a buzillion of us will.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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We will have to wait and see what Sara does. She's been a loose cannon through this entire novel. Why would she change now. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from mumsyone
Another interesting chapter, well written and well edited.
Only one discrepancy that I can see:
Joe watched Sara finished eating.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Another interesting chapter, well written and well edited.
Only one discrepancy that I can see:
Joe watched Sara finished eating.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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I have corrected that error. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
There are times that the path to true love is not exactly strewn with rose petals, but instead the thorns lay about. It takes a great deal of dedication and patience to walk the path, but at the end sits the rose. I'm so glad to hear you are halfway through this phase of the chemo. Please know my prayers are with you each day. ~patty~
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There are times that the path to true love is not exactly strewn with rose petals, but instead the thorns lay about. It takes a great deal of dedication and patience to walk the path, but at the end sits the rose. I'm so glad to hear you are halfway through this phase of the chemo. Please know my prayers are with you each day. ~patty~
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and the prayers. I appreciate both.
Comment from joannesnow
Another well written chapter. Your characters have all now made their way into my heart. A surprise wedding! That would be a hard one to pull off, but if anyone could do it I guess it would be Joe. Your descriptions add so much to the enjoyment of your writing right down to the chosen dresses. This has been a pleasant journey. Hate to see it end.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Another well written chapter. Your characters have all now made their way into my heart. A surprise wedding! That would be a hard one to pull off, but if anyone could do it I guess it would be Joe. Your descriptions add so much to the enjoyment of your writing right down to the chosen dresses. This has been a pleasant journey. Hate to see it end.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your encouragement.
Comment from Paradox Tremors
Great and believable dialogue my friend. Just an absolute and wonderful chapter my friend. Love the surprise of Joe proposing to her. Keep up the good work my friend.
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Great and believable dialogue my friend. Just an absolute and wonderful chapter my friend. Love the surprise of Joe proposing to her. Keep up the good work my friend.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Nanashirley
I like the chapter and the surprise. I see trouble coming about the move. I hope that the day is perfect for her. As always I saw no need for editing.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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I like the chapter and the surprise. I see trouble coming about the move. I hope that the day is perfect for her. As always I saw no need for editing.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2011
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and the continued support.