Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Part 3, Chapter 6"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Carolyn 12
I was right-Yea..I am SO glad that Anna talked with Troy and now his dad will help Anna with the legal issues pro bono..Wonderfully continuation..I look forward to the next segmnet..
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2011
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I was right-Yea..I am SO glad that Anna talked with Troy and now his dad will help Anna with the legal issues pro bono..Wonderfully continuation..I look forward to the next segmnet..
Comment Written 06-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Piggies Grandma
I enjoyed this chapter Barbara, I'm pleased that Troy has found Anna. I hope it all works out for her. Your story was cleverly written and well thought out.
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I enjoyed this chapter Barbara, I'm pleased that Troy has found Anna. I hope it all works out for her. Your story was cleverly written and well thought out.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dmjones
Great Chapter. I was wondering if Anna went into the underground. I'm glad she's safe at least for the moment. You did really well with this and I look forward to seeing where this will go from here.
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Great Chapter. I was wondering if Anna went into the underground. I'm glad she's safe at least for the moment. You did really well with this and I look forward to seeing where this will go from here.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Writeaway...
Another delight to read, Barbara, bravo. Your writing is clear, well-written and cleverly constructed, I cannot suggest anything for improvment, an excellent job, keep writing!! :)
P.S. I hope you are well and on the road to recovery!! :)
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2011
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Another delight to read, Barbara, bravo. Your writing is clear, well-written and cleverly constructed, I cannot suggest anything for improvment, an excellent job, keep writing!! :)
P.S. I hope you are well and on the road to recovery!! :)
Comment Written 06-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review. I have nothing to report in the health area, yet. When I do, I will let you know. I'll add it to my author's notes or write about it.
Comment from PrincessinPurple
This is a good chapter I like it. I am glad Troy got to see Anna. I hope everything will be okay in the end. It's a great story. Keep up the great story.
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This is a good chapter I like it. I am glad Troy got to see Anna. I hope everything will be okay in the end. It's a great story. Keep up the great story.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Chris Tee
WOW Barbara now the twist in the tail is out. I just hope they will be on time to keep that horrendous man inside the jail.
This is another splendid write here girl.
Well done and thank you.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2011
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WOW Barbara now the twist in the tail is out. I just hope they will be on time to keep that horrendous man inside the jail.
This is another splendid write here girl.
Well done and thank you.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
THE STORY IS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER IN EACH NEW CHAPTER. I THINK THE DIALOGUES ARE EXCELLENT, JUST LIKE A NATURAL CONVERSATION.
GREAT JOB!!
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THE STORY IS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER IN EACH NEW CHAPTER. I THINK THE DIALOGUES ARE EXCELLENT, JUST LIKE A NATURAL CONVERSATION.
GREAT JOB!!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Shirley B
Dear Barbara, This is another great chapter. You give all the characters such rich personalities. I look forward to the next chapter. Great job, Shirley
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Dear Barbara, This is another great chapter. You give all the characters such rich personalities. I look forward to the next chapter. Great job, Shirley
Comment Written 06-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
When I logged on tonight I was happy to see you had posted another chapter of this excellent story. I am so glad Anna is safe and Michael too. Troy is so relieved and his father will be, as well. Thank heavens for Margaret who has kept Anna safe. As usual your wrote this chapter well. With expressive words that painted a picture in my mind as is I watching these events take place. Well done....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2011
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Hi Barbara,
When I logged on tonight I was happy to see you had posted another chapter of this excellent story. I am so glad Anna is safe and Michael too. Troy is so relieved and his father will be, as well. Thank heavens for Margaret who has kept Anna safe. As usual your wrote this chapter well. With expressive words that painted a picture in my mind as is I watching these events take place. Well done....blessings, chey
Comment Written 06-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dbmccarter
I like this chapter. It answers several questions about where Anna was. I have a feeling that you are telling facts about how organizations really work. I know dummy husband is somewhere. Can't wait for more.
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I like this chapter. It answers several questions about where Anna was. I have a feeling that you are telling facts about how organizations really work. I know dummy husband is somewhere. Can't wait for more.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.