Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "part 4, Chapter 16"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Chris Tee
this is another stunning part of the book that you have written here Barbara old sport. Well done with this splendid work that we have here ma'am.
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this is another stunning part of the book that you have written here Barbara old sport. Well done with this splendid work that we have here ma'am.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Shirley B
This is a very good chapter. I am always impressed by how you place the number to the crisis centers in your stories. To me that even makes your storyline more powerful. I always enjoy reading your chapters. Great job, Shirley
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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This is a very good chapter. I am always impressed by how you place the number to the crisis centers in your stories. To me that even makes your storyline more powerful. I always enjoy reading your chapters. Great job, Shirley
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Hi, barbara. This chapter moves along at a great pace. The dialogue sounds realistic. Anna seems to be holding up pretty well although she's afraid the threats won't stop until she's dead. It's a tense situation. You had it right about the police. They seem reluctant to investigate a situation until the person is dead. Too bad they can't respond more readily. Great work. judi
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Hi, barbara. This chapter moves along at a great pace. The dialogue sounds realistic. Anna seems to be holding up pretty well although she's afraid the threats won't stop until she's dead. It's a tense situation. You had it right about the police. They seem reluctant to investigate a situation until the person is dead. Too bad they can't respond more readily. Great work. judi
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Dave M
Barbara,
This is an excellent chapter about measures taken to keep Anna safe. She is really lucky. Most women in her position don't have nearly such good friends.
I enjoyed this read and found nothing to criticize.
Dave
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Barbara,
This is an excellent chapter about measures taken to keep Anna safe. She is really lucky. Most women in her position don't have nearly such good friends.
I enjoyed this read and found nothing to criticize.
Dave
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Mara del Mar
A good chapter as always, Barbara, congrats. Really the police without evidence not can make nothing. Then, we continue in the uncertainty until the chapter next.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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A good chapter as always, Barbara, congrats. Really the police without evidence not can make nothing. Then, we continue in the uncertainty until the chapter next.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from DALLAS01
The action moves along smoothly with the help of your realistic dialogue and characters. You have managed to share the sense of fear and anxiety that Anna feels with your readers.
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The action moves along smoothly with the help of your realistic dialogue and characters. You have managed to share the sense of fear and anxiety that Anna feels with your readers.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
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you're welcome.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
another fabulous chapter.
Are you certain Anna will be SAFE?
I pray she will.
I have the feeling she is always being watched by some evil doer.
Gert
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Hello Barb
another fabulous chapter.
Are you certain Anna will be SAFE?
I pray she will.
I have the feeling she is always being watched by some evil doer.
Gert
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from purrfect tale
Now they're doing it right! I lived through a situation exactly like this and one of the first things I did was write out a will. I found out that you can say in a will who you want caring for your kid, but if there is a surviving parent, they get the final say. At least that is the law in Ohio. It sucks.
Notes:
I'll start a file(,)
Bobbie isn't going to stop until I'm dead(,)
Nobody, but you, Troy, Paul, and Betty - comma after Nobody isn't needed
Good night(,) and thank you for everything.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Now they're doing it right! I lived through a situation exactly like this and one of the first things I did was write out a will. I found out that you can say in a will who you want caring for your kid, but if there is a surviving parent, they get the final say. At least that is the law in Ohio. It sucks.
Notes:
I'll start a file(,)
Bobbie isn't going to stop until I'm dead(,)
Nobody, but you, Troy, Paul, and Betty - comma after Nobody isn't needed
Good night(,) and thank you for everything.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your eagle eye. I have made the corrections.
Comment from ulster3
Hello, barbara.
I'm becoming a bit more worried about Troy. To hurt him out of spite and therefore hurt Anna could be on Bobby's friend's minds. I'm glad Anna is being well watched. I wish all abused women had this possibility. Thanks for another lovely chapter.
Warmly, Rebecca
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Hello, barbara.
I'm becoming a bit more worried about Troy. To hurt him out of spite and therefore hurt Anna could be on Bobby's friend's minds. I'm glad Anna is being well watched. I wish all abused women had this possibility. Thanks for another lovely chapter.
Warmly, Rebecca
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Barbara, glad to know Anna is safe, at least today. I can never imagine living an unsafe life like hers, and you describe it so well...:)
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2012
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Hi, Barbara, glad to know Anna is safe, at least today. I can never imagine living an unsafe life like hers, and you describe it so well...:)
Comment Written 19-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and support.