Too Many Birds Are Singing!
almost too fantastical to be true ...56 total reviews
Comment from Titanx9
This is a very interesting story that held my attention from beginning to end. Every little kid with ADHD should be lucky enough to have his or her own Jack. You're masterful at storytelling. You are able to make the story and character come alive in a most entertaining and engrossing way.
reply by the author on 26-May-2013
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This is a very interesting story that held my attention from beginning to end. Every little kid with ADHD should be lucky enough to have his or her own Jack. You're masterful at storytelling. You are able to make the story and character come alive in a most entertaining and engrossing way.
Comment Written 26-May-2013
reply by the author on 26-May-2013
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Thank you so much Dossie! :)Sharyn
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Darnit! I'm soooo angry! I verrry much wanted to give this the six it so deserves, but have given you my monthly allotment.
Even the desk gets a fright as Miss Montgomery tumbles south, and it jumps a full six inches to the left.
Just one of the many brrrrilliant lines from an outstanding piece, one of the best I've ever read anywhere! Bravo and loud applause! Sharyn, you never cease to amaze me with your imagination and sheer talent! ;)
reply by the author on 26-May-2013
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Darnit! I'm soooo angry! I verrry much wanted to give this the six it so deserves, but have given you my monthly allotment.
Even the desk gets a fright as Miss Montgomery tumbles south, and it jumps a full six inches to the left.
Just one of the many brrrrilliant lines from an outstanding piece, one of the best I've ever read anywhere! Bravo and loud applause! Sharyn, you never cease to amaze me with your imagination and sheer talent! ;)
Comment Written 26-May-2013
reply by the author on 26-May-2013
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This is what I mean - you 'get' it! I rather liked the way this one turned out too Phyllis - thank you so much, big-time!
:)Sharyn
Comment from Sam Mendonca
A exciting read with very good usage of word
giving the reader a day with Tommy, and what he must go through
everyday.
Nicely done.
reply by the author on 26-May-2013
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A exciting read with very good usage of word
giving the reader a day with Tommy, and what he must go through
everyday.
Nicely done.
Comment Written 26-May-2013
reply by the author on 26-May-2013
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Bless you Sam! :)Sharyn
Comment from c_lucas
I was bless with such a teacher in the twelve grade when I moved from Georgia to Arizona. "Don't expect to stay in my class. I hate Southerners--They-re stupid." It is hard to learn when the teacher is bent on belittling you. Tommy was lucky to find an understanding teacher. Very well written.
reply by the author on 26-May-2013
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I was bless with such a teacher in the twelve grade when I moved from Georgia to Arizona. "Don't expect to stay in my class. I hate Southerners--They-re stupid." It is hard to learn when the teacher is bent on belittling you. Tommy was lucky to find an understanding teacher. Very well written.
Comment Written 26-May-2013
reply by the author on 26-May-2013
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Bless you Charlie - teachers don't realize the power they hold in their hands and too often they abuse it!
:)S
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You're welcome, S. Charlie
Comment from country ranch writer
It just take a little finesse to quirk a kids interest in doing something that will hold their interest for more than a few minutes. most like games and they can be a way to get them to learn words do math and other stuff normal kids do.
reply by the author on 26-May-2013
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It just take a little finesse to quirk a kids interest in doing something that will hold their interest for more than a few minutes. most like games and they can be a way to get them to learn words do math and other stuff normal kids do.
Comment Written 26-May-2013
reply by the author on 26-May-2013
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You've got it crw - but most teachers, unfortunately, don't bother. I really wish they did!
:)Sharyn
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THEY ALL NEED TO BE TAUGHT HOW TO DO THIS SO THE KIDS CAN FIT IN WITH OTHERS
Comment from Curly Girly
This was a long and interesting story about a little boy with ADHD. He has experienced problems learning to read and likes to sing his own tune. But it appears as if he can read... all by himself!
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reply by the author on 26-May-2013
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This was a long and interesting story about a little boy with ADHD. He has experienced problems learning to read and likes to sing his own tune. But it appears as if he can read... all by himself!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-May-2013
reply by the author on 26-May-2013
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and again, my dear! :))Sharyn