Writings From the Heart
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Comment from TOMORAL
This beautifully written and expressed. We will remember all of those that fought and lost their lives for our freedom. Well done, poet.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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This beautifully written and expressed. We will remember all of those that fought and lost their lives for our freedom. Well done, poet.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
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Thank you
Comment from victor 66
I would give this six stars but you already have that. How ever, I think your poem is extremely important because it is so easy to forget those that gave all because we weren't there to see it. Thank you for your beautiful acknowledgement of the people that defend our country.
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I would give this six stars but you already have that. How ever, I think your poem is extremely important because it is so easy to forget those that gave all because we weren't there to see it. Thank you for your beautiful acknowledgement of the people that defend our country.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
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Thank you
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You are welcome.
Comment from Alan K Pease
Sadness is only part of this poem. Those who we lay to rest who have served their country to the limit of life are remembered in our hearts for the joy they gave us.
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Sadness is only part of this poem. Those who we lay to rest who have served their country to the limit of life are remembered in our hearts for the joy they gave us.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Emeka13
This poem evokes delicate emotions in me. Any thing to honour those who lay their lives in defence of an idea or other is good enough for me.
'Six of my brothers carry me forward, my resting place'
Well Written. Thanks for writing and sharing this. Emeka
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This poem evokes delicate emotions in me. Any thing to honour those who lay their lives in defence of an idea or other is good enough for me.
'Six of my brothers carry me forward, my resting place'
Well Written. Thanks for writing and sharing this. Emeka
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
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thank you Emeka
Comment from joysong
I always like things that honor or commemorate our military. I think all was well done but perhaps the last two lines could have followed the rule of rhyme that you began with and used all the way through. I felt the nice easy flow was broken there. But your thought and content was good. The image you chose was an excellent accompaniment. Well done
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I always like things that honor or commemorate our military. I think all was well done but perhaps the last two lines could have followed the rule of rhyme that you began with and used all the way through. I felt the nice easy flow was broken there. But your thought and content was good. The image you chose was an excellent accompaniment. Well done
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
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thank you joy
Comment from Gracie619
Amazingly well written poem conveying a very sobering message. The last three lines really tie it all up - I could see the six carrying the casket and hear the taps playing. Fantastic job!
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Amazingly well written poem conveying a very sobering message. The last three lines really tie it all up - I could see the six carrying the casket and hear the taps playing. Fantastic job!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
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again thank you for this
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! This poem is heart felt and deep. The author's words are strong, clear and creative. The poem is thought provoking. The artwork is perfect and reflects well the theme of this poem.
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Excellent Poem! This poem is heart felt and deep. The author's words are strong, clear and creative. The poem is thought provoking. The artwork is perfect and reflects well the theme of this poem.
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thank you
Comment from WORDSOFTHEHEART
"The flag she is lowered to complete my deploy.'
This is a beautifully written poem and tribute to the many soldiers that have their final deployment.
I am a member of the Tennessee Patriot Guard Riders.
We ride with our military men and women and give them the honor and respect they deserve at their final deployment.
You have so eloquently written a moving poem in their honor.
Thank you for a beautiful read.
Keep up the great work.
Cheryl
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"The flag she is lowered to complete my deploy.'
This is a beautifully written poem and tribute to the many soldiers that have their final deployment.
I am a member of the Tennessee Patriot Guard Riders.
We ride with our military men and women and give them the honor and respect they deserve at their final deployment.
You have so eloquently written a moving poem in their honor.
Thank you for a beautiful read.
Keep up the great work.
Cheryl
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
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thank you for this
Gary
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You are welcome.
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Comment from Genya
This is a beautifully written poem that brings home the memories of all those who died fighting for us. The picture brought to life the depth and feelings in the poem. Touching words that touched the heart and soul. Loved the lines...six of my brothers carry me forward my resting place. Such sadness. Genya
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This is a beautifully written poem that brings home the memories of all those who died fighting for us. The picture brought to life the depth and feelings in the poem. Touching words that touched the heart and soul. Loved the lines...six of my brothers carry me forward my resting place. Such sadness. Genya
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thank you Genya
Comment from costellsgirl33
This is beautifully written and so very sad
Your poem was so well put together and the flow was flawless
It was filled with emotion and written from the heart and it was great
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This is beautifully written and so very sad
Your poem was so well put together and the flow was flawless
It was filled with emotion and written from the heart and it was great
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
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thank tou
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You are welcome