Writings From the Heart
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Comment from Angel Debbie
Remembering years ago having a boyfriend and possible meeting again many years later. It's funny men change alot over the years this write just happened to me, and funny for the life of me he changed so much in looks I didn't recognize him. 30 years later. But he recognized me. Funny hey.
Great write. Thanks for sharing.
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Remembering years ago having a boyfriend and possible meeting again many years later. It's funny men change alot over the years this write just happened to me, and funny for the life of me he changed so much in looks I didn't recognize him. 30 years later. But he recognized me. Funny hey.
Great write. Thanks for sharing.
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thanks for reading Angel just for fun
Comment from Rubylou
WOW, carefree days of summer,
This brings back so many memories. Much of them I can relate via you wonderful poem. And yes,
dream can come crushing down! YIKES!
Even though your poem was just for fun, it carries a strong message.
Rubylou
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WOW, carefree days of summer,
This brings back so many memories. Much of them I can relate via you wonderful poem. And yes,
dream can come crushing down! YIKES!
Even though your poem was just for fun, it carries a strong message.
Rubylou
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thanks again for this
Comment from seaglass
Funny how the emotions and memories of that first major crush linger so sharp and clear when we can hardly remember what happened yesterday. This poem describes how meaningful those memories are as we get older.
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Funny how the emotions and memories of that first major crush linger so sharp and clear when we can hardly remember what happened yesterday. This poem describes how meaningful those memories are as we get older.
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thank you for reading
Comment from colorfree
A sweet poem, well written of first love. I only have one suggestion for you. It might be a matter of differing styles, but I want to help if I can. Thanks for sharing!
I would suggest changing "First kiss real awkward" to "Awkward first kiss" or at least change "real" to "really".
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A sweet poem, well written of first love. I only have one suggestion for you. It might be a matter of differing styles, but I want to help if I can. Thanks for sharing!
I would suggest changing "First kiss real awkward" to "Awkward first kiss" or at least change "real" to "really".
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thank you
Comment from LIJ Red
I find this an interesting mix of free verse and rhymed verse. I did not look for deep patterns, I found it an easy pleasant read at normal speed.
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I find this an interesting mix of free verse and rhymed verse. I did not look for deep patterns, I found it an easy pleasant read at normal speed.
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thank you
Comment from nomi338
Your lovely poem brings back some very pleasant memories. I remember being surprised by a girl I did not even know liked me. I found as she suddenly and without warning kissed me and ran inside her house. I was at her house early the next day, eager to experience this wonderful new thing. What a summer!
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Your lovely poem brings back some very pleasant memories. I remember being surprised by a girl I did not even know liked me. I found as she suddenly and without warning kissed me and ran inside her house. I was at her house early the next day, eager to experience this wonderful new thing. What a summer!
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thanks nomi
Comment from Kausar_Javeria
Hello there~!
Wow... This is really well written. At first, i read it like a really sweet poem, then the last few lines changed everything.
Great Job!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>-(^_^)
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Hello there~!
Wow... This is really well written. At first, i read it like a really sweet poem, then the last few lines changed everything.
Great Job!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>-(^_^)
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thank you jazak
Comment from kiwijenny
Oh I love the knights in white satin.....the Moody Blues..............
What a poignant poem of first love.....
Well done......................
God bless
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Oh I love the knights in white satin.....the Moody Blues..............
What a poignant poem of first love.....
Well done......................
God bless
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thank you
Comment from yougogencoco
I really liked how this poem told a story. I really felt as if I were the person recalling my first love. Very powerful.
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I really liked how this poem told a story. I really felt as if I were the person recalling my first love. Very powerful.
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thank you
Comment from emrpoems
We all have those memories. Sometimes we wonder what became of friends or loves of the past.
Some rhymed couplets with lots of emotion
a pleasant read
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We all have those memories. Sometimes we wonder what became of friends or loves of the past.
Some rhymed couplets with lots of emotion
a pleasant read
Comment Written 10-Aug-2014
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thank you