A Painted Face
a final show55 total reviews
Comment from Jackarrie
I like your poem about how one has to go on, because we really do not have a choice. The show must go on, there are others to think of besides ourselves.
Well written, good luck in the contest. Mary
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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I like your poem about how one has to go on, because we really do not have a choice. The show must go on, there are others to think of besides ourselves.
Well written, good luck in the contest. Mary
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Many thanks for your thoughts on this. It is very much appreciated
Comment from danpald
So it seems to some of late
That there is only one fate
To live the game of life as a play
Or to take that play form the stage
So hard the loss of understanding
When darkness becomes the page
The actor turns from the stage
Seeking only to make a new day
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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So it seems to some of late
That there is only one fate
To live the game of life as a play
Or to take that play form the stage
So hard the loss of understanding
When darkness becomes the page
The actor turns from the stage
Seeking only to make a new day
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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I sincerely hope you are keeping your replies written down somewhere! Many thanks
Comment from TPAC
Lovely expressed nicely in a smooth flowing rhyme poet put their foot in this work bursting an abundance of talent Great write
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Lovely expressed nicely in a smooth flowing rhyme poet put their foot in this work bursting an abundance of talent Great write
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Many thanks for your thoughts and response to this piece.
Comment from CR Delport
The implication of this poem is very sad. I think for any person to reach a point where they think they can't go on is sad. There is so much beauty in this world. One must just chose to see it. This is well done. Good luck.
Take care.
Christelle.
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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The implication of this poem is very sad. I think for any person to reach a point where they think they can't go on is sad. There is so much beauty in this world. One must just chose to see it. This is well done. Good luck.
Take care.
Christelle.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Many thanks for your thoughts on this. I agree totally. While this is not biographical, it is 'real'. The worst thing is this is based on my work with teenagers... very sad indeed.
Comment from Kyam
Wow!! so sad my dearest! So raw and so real, I really wasn't expecting that. I mean really. It was so powerful though. GREAT! Faith
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reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Wow!! so sad my dearest! So raw and so real, I really wasn't expecting that. I mean really. It was so powerful though. GREAT! Faith
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Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 27-May-2015
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Many thanks for this great review. It isn't biographical but it is 'real'. Much appreciated