The Mary Bell story/Cerulean eyes
Suffer little children-Mary the 10 year old Strangler55 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
Meia, the poem and the follow on story is horrific to my mind. How a child of such a tender age could do the things she did is a,ost beyond understanding. It is good though that she eventually became a good mother and grandmother. Patricia
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Meia, the poem and the follow on story is horrific to my mind. How a child of such a tender age could do the things she did is a,ost beyond understanding. It is good though that she eventually became a good mother and grandmother. Patricia
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thankyou so much for your lovely review! A tragic tale but it is something I like to do- deal with historical crimes from a different perspective. So many thanks, Meia :)
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A gruesome story. You're really good at these biographical tales. When I was young I saw a movie, Bad Seed, about a ten year old girl who murdered people. It was one of the scariest movies i ever saw and I've never forgotten it.
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A gruesome story. You're really good at these biographical tales. When I was young I saw a movie, Bad Seed, about a ten year old girl who murdered people. It was one of the scariest movies i ever saw and I've never forgotten it.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thankyou so much for your lovely review! I have seen the Bad Seed but this story always scared me more! A tragic tale but it is something I like to do- deal with historical crimes from a different perspective. So many thanks, Meia :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem, in a way I can understand the pain she had to suffer, make her do the unthinkable. A scream for urgent help? I am glad her adult life turned out better than her childhood.
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A very well-written heartfelt poem, in a way I can understand the pain she had to suffer, make her do the unthinkable. A scream for urgent help? I am glad her adult life turned out better than her childhood.
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thankyou so much for your lovely review! A tragic tale but it is something I like to do- deal with historical crimes from a different perspective. So many thanks, Meia :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Hi Meia, I have read this before, but it never fails to bring joy with your well chosen words and story well told with compassion, love Dolly x
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Hi Meia, I have read this before, but it never fails to bring joy with your well chosen words and story well told with compassion, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thankyou so much for your lovely review! A tragic tale but it is something I like to do- deal with historical crimes from a different perspective. So many thanks, Meia :)
Comment from laffad
Jesus Christ. This is such a killer poem, literally. Sends chills down my spine. Only suggestions I've got are to look at the formatting, and make sure everything is its appropriate size. Other than that, bravo!!!
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Jesus Christ. This is such a killer poem, literally. Sends chills down my spine. Only suggestions I've got are to look at the formatting, and make sure everything is its appropriate size. Other than that, bravo!!!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thankyou so much for your lovely review! Can I ask you though, what have I missed with the formatting? I thought I had gotten it pretty much right. any help would be most appreciated kindest regards Meia :)
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Maybe put some spaces between the dialogue? That's what people always suggest to me. You've done wonderfully otherwise!!!