Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Your Halo"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This is one time that everyone can be a hero. A troubleing time that takes a special person, talent, job, to go one step beyond to help fellow man. Very nicely done for the challenge
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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This is one time that everyone can be a hero. A troubleing time that takes a special person, talent, job, to go one step beyond to help fellow man. Very nicely done for the challenge
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thanks much Barb, I send prayers of abundant peace, calm and good health!
Comment from samandlancelot
JLR,
I like the way you paint the tumultuous times we live in, but it doesn't end there. We each have something to offer. When we give what we were created for, we each have the ability to emanate our own halo, for God's glory, of course.
Nice.
Patricia
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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JLR,
I like the way you paint the tumultuous times we live in, but it doesn't end there. We each have something to offer. When we give what we were created for, we each have the ability to emanate our own halo, for God's glory, of course.
Nice.
Patricia
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Patricia, yes and with God's Grace we will see all mankind thrive.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
There have been so many wonderful people out there doing things for those unable to help themselves. If this virus does nothing else but bring the goodness out in people, then that would be wonderful. It's so sad that it took something so dreadful to bring us all together. But, we have, and will continue to do so. That picture of the halo, that, to me is a sign that He is with us. Lovely poem, JLR! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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There have been so many wonderful people out there doing things for those unable to help themselves. If this virus does nothing else but bring the goodness out in people, then that would be wonderful. It's so sad that it took something so dreadful to bring us all together. But, we have, and will continue to do so. That picture of the halo, that, to me is a sign that He is with us. Lovely poem, JLR! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Sandra, I appreciate your kind validation, and with God's Grace we will see all mankind thrive.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Ideally we will all do our part, but his depends on our humanity. I like this ray of hope :"Look in the mirror, seek in your heart
that warm glow, the presence of God
under your softly shimmering halo."
Thank you for sharing and stay safe
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Ideally we will all do our part, but his depends on our humanity. I like this ray of hope :"Look in the mirror, seek in your heart
that warm glow, the presence of God
under your softly shimmering halo."
Thank you for sharing and stay safe
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Iza,thank you for wishes for continued good health, and with God's Grace we will see all mankind thrive.
Comment from Sally Law
We oftentimes see the wreckage and human casualties first, then the miracles that occured during it, afterwards. Humans that we are, it takes is awhile sometimes. I see it now more than ever as I am older and wiser. Sending you my best today for the lovely poem. Sal :)
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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We oftentimes see the wreckage and human casualties first, then the miracles that occured during it, afterwards. Humans that we are, it takes is awhile sometimes. I see it now more than ever as I am older and wiser. Sending you my best today for the lovely poem. Sal :)
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Sal, I hope your numbers of illness are still being abated, be well!
Comment from joycetreasures
JLR,
This is a lovely and touching poem. Yes, we have to do our part. We all have a Halo. We can pray for others which is free. It's how we choose to give, share and love with it. This is a trying and scary time in our world. We all need to give a hand to help others. In your first stanza, we should strive to be more Christ-like. As you said, we can TRY to give of our time and talents. I believe, "We reap what we sow." Being Kind is the key. Your image fits your poem. No errors that I see in your poem. I can see your aura in your poem!! Good job! Keep writing:-)
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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JLR,
This is a lovely and touching poem. Yes, we have to do our part. We all have a Halo. We can pray for others which is free. It's how we choose to give, share and love with it. This is a trying and scary time in our world. We all need to give a hand to help others. In your first stanza, we should strive to be more Christ-like. As you said, we can TRY to give of our time and talents. I believe, "We reap what we sow." Being Kind is the key. Your image fits your poem. No errors that I see in your poem. I can see your aura in your poem!! Good job! Keep writing:-)
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Joyce, I do thank you for your kind words, and with God's Grace we will see all mankind thrive.
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you are welcome.