Writings From the Heart
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Comment from Ms. Gray
I enjoyed reading your thoughtful poem this afternoon. It is good to ponder the idea of being accountable for our actions. Thanks for making me think by sharing this poem.
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I enjoyed reading your thoughtful poem this afternoon. It is good to ponder the idea of being accountable for our actions. Thanks for making me think by sharing this poem.
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your welcome Pat and thanks for reading
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi GW,
This is a very thoughtful poem that asks some interesting questions. It would be wonderful to live long enough to fulfill all our aspiration, but that may not be possible. So we continue our journey through life and hope for the best. Well done, chey
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Hi GW,
This is a very thoughtful poem that asks some interesting questions. It would be wonderful to live long enough to fulfill all our aspiration, but that may not be possible. So we continue our journey through life and hope for the best. Well done, chey
Comment Written 14-May-2010
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thank you chey for the comments
Comment from Judian James
This is quite a heavy one, this time DW. Many questions that we all toss around and never may find the answers to.
"With conviction to the aspirations of what can be achieved
Only to show true emotions with understanding to what is at hand" Yes, sometimes we never realize our dreams and deal with what's at hand as best we can but all of us seeking peace. excellent, thoughtful piece.
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This is quite a heavy one, this time DW. Many questions that we all toss around and never may find the answers to.
"With conviction to the aspirations of what can be achieved
Only to show true emotions with understanding to what is at hand" Yes, sometimes we never realize our dreams and deal with what's at hand as best we can but all of us seeking peace. excellent, thoughtful piece.
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thank you Judian for the comments GW...smiling
Comment from fionageorge
Powerful, and well structured poem, with a strong message and giving the reader pause for thought. You have chosen appropriate artwork, which is powerful and complements the poem, but the words stand on their own.
Warmest regards, Marijke
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Powerful, and well structured poem, with a strong message and giving the reader pause for thought. You have chosen appropriate artwork, which is powerful and complements the poem, but the words stand on their own.
Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment Written 14-May-2010
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thank you marijke for your comments and for reading GW
Comment from Deejharrington
Good questions, all. It's the answers that are hard to find. Someday all questions will be satisfied, I hope. A terrific poem that makes the reader think. That is the most noble intention of all writing. If we can make the reader question and consider.
dj
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Good questions, all. It's the answers that are hard to find. Someday all questions will be satisfied, I hope. A terrific poem that makes the reader think. That is the most noble intention of all writing. If we can make the reader question and consider.
dj
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Thank you DJ for your comment and for reading, GW
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you're welcome
deb
Comment from TexAnn
I have just read the cowboy poem ... much reflection is happening for the moment. Also a very good and conflicting poem.
The last sentence .... "With the conflict of never finding peace", how many times do we all wonder?
TexAnn
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I have just read the cowboy poem ... much reflection is happening for the moment. Also a very good and conflicting poem.
The last sentence .... "With the conflict of never finding peace", how many times do we all wonder?
TexAnn
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thanks texann
Comment from laren
This is a great poem which tell us about aspirations and the possibility of reconcile preconceived ideas and give something in exchange to live in armony. This poem moves to reflection.
Congratulations!
Laren
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This is a great poem which tell us about aspirations and the possibility of reconcile preconceived ideas and give something in exchange to live in armony. This poem moves to reflection.
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 14-May-2010
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thank you laren
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You're welcome,
Laren
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Thank you for sharing,
Laren
Comment from misscookie
Live the photo, who isit?
I love the flow of the poem
Yourwordsare very to the point and very powreful
this is a poem that makes the readers go MMmmmmm
Thereis a message within this write.
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Live the photo, who isit?
I love the flow of the poem
Yourwordsare very to the point and very powreful
this is a poem that makes the readers go MMmmmmm
Thereis a message within this write.
Comment Written 14-May-2010
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thank you misscookie
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you are very welcome, have a nice day.
Comment from Janine Ellis-Fynn
This is a heartfelt, expressive poem that poses the questions, I believe so many of use wrestle with. But, some are more courageous than others. Some, choose to hide. Very well written. Good job!
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This is a heartfelt, expressive poem that poses the questions, I believe so many of use wrestle with. But, some are more courageous than others. Some, choose to hide. Very well written. Good job!
Comment Written 14-May-2010
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thank you Janine
Comment from patmedium
This is so true to the agonies of a dark, lonely night's musings. Keep on churning these out, Gary, and you soon will be feeling so light, cheerful and baggage free that you won't recognise yourself! Pat.
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This is so true to the agonies of a dark, lonely night's musings. Keep on churning these out, Gary, and you soon will be feeling so light, cheerful and baggage free that you won't recognise yourself! Pat.
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thank you pat for reading