Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Quest"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from James Dooney
I like what you have done with this one once again. I like your style and all here. You hold things together very well. Great work !
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I like what you have done with this one once again. I like your style and all here. You hold things together very well. Great work !
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from LIJ Red
I may take me a bit to get accustomed to your phraseology but still I can't actually pick it apart. So. Excellent.
There's crap luck and hard times, true, but generally a sense of failure and discontent also comes from inside...
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I may take me a bit to get accustomed to your phraseology but still I can't actually pick it apart. So. Excellent.
There's crap luck and hard times, true, but generally a sense of failure and discontent also comes from inside...
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from kiwisteveh
A lovely expression of how to live fulfilled life, making the most of the opportunities that appear on your journey.
Free verse was a wise choice to portray your thoughts here.
Steve
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A lovely expression of how to live fulfilled life, making the most of the opportunities that appear on your journey.
Free verse was a wise choice to portray your thoughts here.
Steve
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from MizKat
Hi GW,
This is another beautiful poem written by your hand from your heart. I really enjoyed reading it as your poetry is always so special.
Kat
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Hi GW,
This is another beautiful poem written by your hand from your heart. I really enjoyed reading it as your poetry is always so special.
Kat
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from Just2Write
This is a nice Free Verse that encourages us to search for our purpose in life. Some make the quest and never find it - others seem to know their way and never lose it.
This is a good poem of introspection and contemplation.
Rose
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This is a nice Free Verse that encourages us to search for our purpose in life. Some make the quest and never find it - others seem to know their way and never lose it.
This is a good poem of introspection and contemplation.
Rose
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from Ben Colder
Indeed poet. Life is our on choice. good or bad. Strong wording in this poem. A good rhythm and kept my attention. My best to you poet.
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Indeed poet. Life is our on choice. good or bad. Strong wording in this poem. A good rhythm and kept my attention. My best to you poet.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from carl8447
This is the an interesting concept and a very interesting idea about a submarine. I was never in the armed forces only have heard from stories from friends and families, but I wouldn't know that this was about a submarine without the picture. I thought it was more about the commitment to soldiers to soldiers.
Great job
Carl
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This is the an interesting concept and a very interesting idea about a submarine. I was never in the armed forces only have heard from stories from friends and families, but I wouldn't know that this was about a submarine without the picture. I thought it was more about the commitment to soldiers to soldiers.
Great job
Carl
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have often thought if a person can't love themselves they can't truly love another person. As I've aged, I still feel that's very true. One must at peace with themselves. I enjoyed reading your wonderful post.
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I have often thought if a person can't love themselves they can't truly love another person. As I've aged, I still feel that's very true. One must at peace with themselves. I enjoyed reading your wonderful post.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from Treischel
A powerful free verse poem. A discussion of life that embraces independence and is comfortable with the choices made and the person that was formed. Well done.
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A powerful free verse poem. A discussion of life that embraces independence and is comfortable with the choices made and the person that was formed. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
Comment from w.j.debi
It seems you have lived a full life and have gained a lot of wisdom along the way. To be your own true best friend and be comfortable with who you are is a true gift that so many people struggle for but never achieve. Bless you for sharing.
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It seems you have lived a full life and have gained a lot of wisdom along the way. To be your own true best friend and be comfortable with who you are is a true gift that so many people struggle for but never achieve. Bless you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014