Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Part 2 Chapter 5"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from jgirlie152
I enjoyed this chapter of your story very much. The dialogue was good and I felt like I was in the room with the characters, a quiet mouse in a corner. Although this chapter is not so dramatic, I look forward to reading other exciting chapters leading up to this.
Joan
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2011
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I enjoyed this chapter of your story very much. The dialogue was good and I felt like I was in the room with the characters, a quiet mouse in a corner. Although this chapter is not so dramatic, I look forward to reading other exciting chapters leading up to this.
Joan
Comment Written 11-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Deejharrington
Excellent chapter! Well, they've got the whole family on board trying to find Anna and her son. I am the surprise the shelters would give out any information on those staying with them. I just hope she is safe. Very well written. The whole family as a unit is a terrific idea. Very well done.
deb
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Excellent chapter! Well, they've got the whole family on board trying to find Anna and her son. I am the surprise the shelters would give out any information on those staying with them. I just hope she is safe. Very well written. The whole family as a unit is a terrific idea. Very well done.
deb
Comment Written 11-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2011
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They may not have, remember I said, they didn't admit to knowing of her. Thank you for your kind review.
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You're welcome
deb
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
Agood write with imagery and flow has a descriptive script and you have displayed it well. Hi I enjoyed your script it was a good piece of writing. Thanks for sharing with me.
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Agood write with imagery and flow has a descriptive script and you have displayed it well. Hi I enjoyed your script it was a good piece of writing. Thanks for sharing with me.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from bookishfabler
That is great artwork you found. I didn't spot even a littlenit or spag. Very well done. I felt like sitting down and having a cookie with the family. Yum. Thanks for another great chapter
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book
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That is great artwork you found. I didn't spot even a littlenit or spag. Very well done. I felt like sitting down and having a cookie with the family. Yum. Thanks for another great chapter
hugs
book
Comment Written 11-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from ulster3
Hello barbara...
This meaningful write continues to hold attention. In fact I'm downright hungry following this reading, where the characters are savoring steaks, cookies and iced tea. LOL.
I hope you have a very fine week-end and stay well.
Warmly, Rebecca
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2011
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Hello barbara...
This meaningful write continues to hold attention. In fact I'm downright hungry following this reading, where the characters are savoring steaks, cookies and iced tea. LOL.
I hope you have a very fine week-end and stay well.
Warmly, Rebecca
Comment Written 11-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2011
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I think they also had baked potatos and salad, with the dinner, but I couldn't fit it in. Thank you for the kind review.
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LOL....
Comment from pickthorn
An interesting chapter that pauses to regroup and relax a bit before resuming the search for Anna. The suspense is mounting in this chapter. Those are some shocking statistics in your author's notes.
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An interesting chapter that pauses to regroup and relax a bit before resuming the search for Anna. The suspense is mounting in this chapter. Those are some shocking statistics in your author's notes.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from denhagan
This Part 2 of Chapter 5 was very interesting to read about Troy visiting his dad and mom, and he and his dad come up with a plan to find Anna. I enjoyed reading this story.
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This Part 2 of Chapter 5 was very interesting to read about Troy visiting his dad and mom, and he and his dad come up with a plan to find Anna. I enjoyed reading this story.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
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You're welcome. ~denhagan
Comment from amada
You paint a great relationship between Troy and his parents. I imagined i was watching a family show of the 60's. Now all is drama and confusion. Lovely read!
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You paint a great relationship between Troy and his parents. I imagined i was watching a family show of the 60's. Now all is drama and confusion. Lovely read!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I grew up in the 60's.
Comment from Chris Tee
Babara wow girl!!
This was another good part of a chapter.
You have a very good story here and I look forward to each posted part.
I hope you are better, and our prayers are bringing comfort.
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Babara wow girl!!
This was another good part of a chapter.
You have a very good story here and I look forward to each posted part.
I hope you are better, and our prayers are bringing comfort.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2011
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I am working on building up my strength now. It's slow going. I go to my radialogist on Friday and my oncologist on the 23rd. Thank you for the kind review and the support.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
Love this chapter sounds like a relaxing day and everyone in in a happy mood
You definably have a very natural flow
It was a pleasure to read you upcoming published novel.
Gert
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Hello Barb
Love this chapter sounds like a relaxing day and everyone in in a happy mood
You definably have a very natural flow
It was a pleasure to read you upcoming published novel.
Gert
Comment Written 11-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and continued support.
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Smiles
Gert