Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Part two, Chapter 11"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from rchitwood
As always your story is very good and I am interested in seeing who tried to take Michael. I will have to watch for the next chapter very creative and believable.Your husbands photo compliments your story well.Blessings Rita
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As always your story is very good and I am interested in seeing who tried to take Michael. I will have to watch for the next chapter very creative and believable.Your husbands photo compliments your story well.Blessings Rita
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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review. My husband thanks you too.
Comment from mumsyone
Good chapter, Barbara, and your husband is quite an artist!
They watched in silence as the large orange ball rise (rose)in the sky.
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Good chapter, Barbara, and your husband is quite an artist!
They watched in silence as the large orange ball rise (rose)in the sky.
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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2011
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I have fixed that error. Thank you for letting me know about it. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Hareem.S
This is another great chapter you have written Barbara. I havenot followed all, but read some, and you most certainly created a suspense at the end. Its sure is a page turner. Enjoyed reading it.
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This is another great chapter you have written Barbara. I havenot followed all, but read some, and you most certainly created a suspense at the end. Its sure is a page turner. Enjoyed reading it.
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Thank you for your kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I have never seen an Indian Blanket before and your husband is very talented...just like you! I too believe Mrs.. Rodgers paid someone to abduct Michael. She would do must anything to take him from Anna. I got a spark of hope at the end of this chapter. Anna lookng into Troy's eyes and his to hers...maybe the time will come when they can be together without fear of Bobby and his unstable mother. Great chapter....blessings, chey
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Hi Barbara,
I have never seen an Indian Blanket before and your husband is very talented...just like you! I too believe Mrs.. Rodgers paid someone to abduct Michael. She would do must anything to take him from Anna. I got a spark of hope at the end of this chapter. Anna lookng into Troy's eyes and his to hers...maybe the time will come when they can be together without fear of Bobby and his unstable mother. Great chapter....blessings, chey
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Barbara, this is a great opportunity to catch one's breath after the kidnapping. I'm guessing a kiss comes next. Of course, if Troy has a problem, that might not be wise. Well done. :) Nancy
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Barbara, this is a great opportunity to catch one's breath after the kidnapping. I'm guessing a kiss comes next. Of course, if Troy has a problem, that might not be wise. Well done. :) Nancy
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It will be a while before the kiss comes. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Enjoyed the chapter and the connection is getting deeper between Anna and Troy. You keep this story very interesting to the reader. Great job.
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Enjoyed the chapter and the connection is getting deeper between Anna and Troy. You keep this story very interesting to the reader. Great job.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from livingwords
This keeps moving at a good pace. It does seem odd Bobby's father acted so quickly. Or did he? Keep it going, Barb. Dan :))
Gotcha on the echo effect again: "Watch. This is the best place to watch the moon rise." They watched in silence as the large orange ball rise in the sky...
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This keeps moving at a good pace. It does seem odd Bobby's father acted so quickly. Or did he? Keep it going, Barb. Dan :))
Gotcha on the echo effect again: "Watch. This is the best place to watch the moon rise." They watched in silence as the large orange ball rise in the sky...
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2011
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I will take care of that extra watch. Thank you for catching it.
Comment from adewpearl
Anna sure has found her prince Charming in Troy, complete with his entire family. Your story sure illustrates how evil can reside in one family and so much good can reside in another. Brooke
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Anna sure has found her prince Charming in Troy, complete with his entire family. Your story sure illustrates how evil can reside in one family and so much good can reside in another. Brooke
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara,, a great job writing this chapter for your book, your husband did a beautiful job painting the picture, it's gorgeous, i spotted one spag, you have livin groom instead of living room. i look forward to finding out if it was the mother or bobby who paid to have anna's son kidnapped.
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this is very well written, barbara,, a great job writing this chapter for your book, your husband did a beautiful job painting the picture, it's gorgeous, i spotted one spag, you have livin groom instead of living room. i look forward to finding out if it was the mother or bobby who paid to have anna's son kidnapped.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
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I must have been correcting that as you were reading. I will double check in case I forgot to save, Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Writingfundimension
You have many wonderful elements going in this chapter, barbara. Your writing makes it easy to catch up with all that's been happening without being an obvious amount of backstory. That's not easy to achieve. I found your ending of this chapter hopeful and romantic. Kind regards, Bev
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You have many wonderful elements going in this chapter, barbara. Your writing makes it easy to catch up with all that's been happening without being an obvious amount of backstory. That's not easy to achieve. I found your ending of this chapter hopeful and romantic. Kind regards, Bev
Comment Written 09-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
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