Comment from Auroraboreal800

Excellent

It seems like Ana is finally ready for romance... I really like this short chapter. Very well written... A pleasure to read, as always!

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from RUMLOVE1000

Excellent

Great continuation as this has become a very interesting story for me. Some people just don't have a clue when a relationship is over. I enjoyed the smooth flow of this as like the last chapter that I read and a very nice climax to this.

Thanks for sharing with me :)

Blessings,
Rumlove1000

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Belinda

Excellent

Well, seems like Anna is not safe yet... You're so good in describing how things go from good to bad and to good again, Barbara. Wonder what will happen next...:)

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Rama Rao

Excellent

If it's Monday it's Barbara's post. It's excellent as usual and describes one more incident of harassment by the man with the loud muffler.
However, the scene of the man pushing Anna against the car and what followed next is not very clear. Maybe, it's worthwhile to have a second look at it. He obviously pushed her against the car and ran away. Similarly Troy looked at Anna and ran after the assailant.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind review. I will take another look.

Comment from Dave M

Excellent

Barbara,

This is an excellent chapter, and without any nits that I could find. I enjoyed reading it. Maybe we'll find out who's behind all the harassment.

Dave

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Rob Caudle

Excellent

my first visit but not my last you write with an easy style giving the scenes you create a natural feel from the serene to the violent no sense of of forced dialogue a very well written piece. I am new to the site and just finding my way about. I glad I stumbled upon you and your story. Thanks for the good read.
Rob

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012

Welcome! Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from purrfect tale

Excellent

Alright, license plate numbers. I can't wait to find out who has been doing all the tormenting. Another good chapter. I have do suggestions for any changes.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind review and your support.

Comment from RebelRose

Excellent

When will it ever end? I am sure that is a question Anna asks over and over. These abusers don't give up easily. Another great chapter.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Cumbrianlass

Excellent

Poor little guy - glad he wasn't hurt. Lots of excitement in this one, and finally, they have something very tangible to give the cops. Perhaps now, something will happen to give her some well deserved peace. Very good chapter, Barbara.

Av

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Excellent dialogue - they really do sound like a loving "family" even if Anna hasn't married into the family yet.
pulled into her parking space, and Troy pulled - add comma
A license number - this is good news even if it came from such a scary event... Brooke

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2012

I wondered about that comma because I switched subjects. Thank you for your eagle eye and continued support.