Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 55 "Part two, Chapter 17"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Margaret Snowdon
A really good chapter, Barbara...
showing how on edge Anna is and
she has every right to be, poor
girl.
You said Slim was in prison for armed robbery[,](;) what did his rob?"
Everett took a bit of cheeseburger - do you mean "bite"
Margaret
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2012
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A really good chapter, Barbara...
showing how on edge Anna is and
she has every right to be, poor
girl.
You said Slim was in prison for armed robbery[,](;) what did his rob?"
Everett took a bit of cheeseburger - do you mean "bite"
Margaret
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2012
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Thank you for your eagle eye and I have make the correction.
Comment from c_lucas
Someone doing survelliance needs a good disquise. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2012
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Someone doing survelliance needs a good disquise. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review review and your continued support.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie