Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 66 "Anna's in a coma."Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from fictionwriter
I enjoyed this. Watch that you don't repeat Anna's name too often, it brings the reader out of the story.
and Anna's eye lidseyelids) kept moving.
Nice job.
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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I enjoyed this. Watch that you don't repeat Anna's name too often, it brings the reader out of the story.
and Anna's eye lidseyelids) kept moving.
Nice job.
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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I was wondering about that, but there were three women so I was afraid my readers would get confused. I will recheck it.
Thank you.
Comment from gramalot8
Barbara, I've heard of this before. A lot of patients respond to certain stimuli, espcially to children and to their beloved pets. Good chapter again. Jerri
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Barbara, I've heard of this before. A lot of patients respond to certain stimuli, espcially to children and to their beloved pets. Good chapter again. Jerri
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and insight.
Comment from elgone
It is a well told story of hope for Anna slowly coming back from her coma. Doctors don't know all the answers. An a mother's love is always a very powerful thing.
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It is a well told story of hope for Anna slowly coming back from her coma. Doctors don't know all the answers. An a mother's love is always a very powerful thing.
E
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I couldn't believe Anna responded to Michael like she did, it's a miracle. But then a mother's love performs all kind of miracles so why should coming out of a coma be any different? Now there is hope for her complete recovery and I do hope that happens. This is an uplifting chapter that leaves one with a sense of wonder. Well done....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Hi Barbara,
I couldn't believe Anna responded to Michael like she did, it's a miracle. But then a mother's love performs all kind of miracles so why should coming out of a coma be any different? Now there is hope for her complete recovery and I do hope that happens. This is an uplifting chapter that leaves one with a sense of wonder. Well done....blessings, chey
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Writingfundimension
What a perfect post for Mother's Day, barbara. It's so touching the way Anna is trying to come out of the coma to speak with her son. Seems like our girl is on her way back! Great chapter ... Warm regards, Bev
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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What a perfect post for Mother's Day, barbara. It's so touching the way Anna is trying to come out of the coma to speak with her son. Seems like our girl is on her way back! Great chapter ... Warm regards, Bev
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, barbara
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Well this was a tear jerker. I went through a pile of Kleenex. I thought you'd penned this brilliantly, and with great care and skill.
The voice of Michael calling his mother is got to be the most heart wrenching part of this post.
Powerful work, exceptional writing as always Barbara.
Great post.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Well this was a tear jerker. I went through a pile of Kleenex. I thought you'd penned this brilliantly, and with great care and skill.
The voice of Michael calling his mother is got to be the most heart wrenching part of this post.
Powerful work, exceptional writing as always Barbara.
Great post.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouragement.
Comment from Gungalo
Oh my girl, she is coming around and Michael is her stimulus. It's something that she really cares about that's why. Boy you really know how to keep the reader on pins and needles don't you? LOL.
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Oh my girl, she is coming around and Michael is her stimulus. It's something that she really cares about that's why. Boy you really know how to keep the reader on pins and needles don't you? LOL.
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your encouragement.
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My pleasure Barbara!!
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
Great chapter as usual
Very dramatic touched my heart
look at the following ---
Betty took Michael's small hand and moved it so it touched Anna's.
Question did you intend to say her instead of him?
Betty took Michael's small hand and moved it so it touched Anna's. "Maybe touching (him) and you will help." She glanced toward Troy.
Gert
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Hello Barb
Great chapter as usual
Very dramatic touched my heart
look at the following ---
Betty took Michael's small hand and moved it so it touched Anna's.
Question did you intend to say her instead of him?
Betty took Michael's small hand and moved it so it touched Anna's. "Maybe touching (him) and you will help." She glanced toward Troy.
Gert
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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I will take care of that area, thank you for catching it.
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You are welcome Barb
Love
Gert
Comment from tinams
This is a very well written chapter Barbara, with a smooth flow of words, making it a very interesting read. Well done :) Tina
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This is a very well written chapter Barbara, with a smooth flow of words, making it a very interesting read. Well done :) Tina
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Tonulak
Barbara,
This was a very touching chapter. You kept the drama going just enough and gave the reader hope in the end. I enjoyed this one very much.
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Barbara,
This was a very touching chapter. You kept the drama going just enough and gave the reader hope in the end. I enjoyed this one very much.
Comment Written 13-May-2012
reply by the author on 13-May-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.